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Fic: Blank Mind 3/3

Sep 01, 2010 17:22

Title: Blank Mind 3/3 - Complete
Universe: XI
Rating: NC-17
Relationship status: established relationship
Word count: 5578 this part (16,600 overall)
Genre: angst
Trope: amnesia
Warning: Language, adult themes, trauma, graphic/explicit sex, fluff.
A/N: Last part. Let me know if you enjoy it because it makes me feel like the cookie monster being given ( Read more... )

fic: kirk/spock

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lalazee September 1 2010, 17:06:02 UTC

DO I GET FIRST COMMENT AGAIN IDK WE'LL FIND OUT!!

Let me just say: Your sex scenes literally make my lips tingle. How that is possible, I don't even know. But I love your steamy descriptions, and the flow and movement of those moments, and just GUH SO HOT.

And then of course, all of this. And Spock's loyalty. And Jim's return. And my heart hurts but in the good way. You evoke such emotion through your stories, I just love it. Thank you for this beautiful piece. YOU ROCK!

lalazee September 1 2010, 17:06:21 UTC

OH SO CLOSE FUUU

demonllama1 September 3 2010, 11:28:25 UTC

I want you to know that if I could move comments, I would have moved yours to first. ;)

(Banbury people represent - Yes, I was that anon on tumblr. We're halfway to a trek convention.)

lalazee September 3 2010, 11:37:17 UTC

NO WAY, REALLY?! Amazing. I'm in the presence of ~royalty~ hehehehe ;)

demonllama1 September 3 2010, 11:26:05 UTC

Writing sex scenes is always so tedious for me because I write it, then I re-write it and then i'll edit it, and then re-write it again, haha. It's a slooow process.

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it my love. I adored writing this and I'm pleased I finally got around to posting it. You should see my WIP folder, it's just getting ridiculous. :)

lalazee September 3 2010, 11:38:57 UTC

OMG are you me?! My WIP folder is like bursting at the seams. It's just a very angry erection that I won't finish off and eventually it's all just going to blow up in my face.

...I didn't get much sleep last night. Was up til 5am writing fanfic TROLOLO I'm not well.

Sex scenes are the same for me. Doesn't come naturally, but I get there in the end. AS LONG AS IT TURNS OUT, I DON'T CARE HOW LONG IT TOOK TO WRITE - RIGHT? :D

demonllama1 September 3 2010, 12:59:48 UTC

It's just a very angry erection that I won't finish off and eventually it's all just going to blow up in my face.

I want to marry you, haha. That comment made me full on burst out laughing. Comparing an erection to an WIP folder is perfection and I would like to have your children. ;) ;) I could name them after Star Trek characters and you wouldn't judge me. :D

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