The Comment Story

Nov 16, 2009 17:24

This story is to be written by comments.
There will be only one coment.
And then all the replies to that one will bulid the story.
Rules:
1) Don't make your reply more than a paragraph long.
2) Only break the fourth wall once they're wasted.

Go!

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cizi, yohko, fan fiction, supernatural

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cizi1410 November 17 2009, 03:28:15 UTC
"Right time for what?" Sam put down the prized items on the table. "Hi Cas!" Sam waved at Cas who blinked owlishly at him. "Hi Samuel." Cas waved back and looked at Dean "Who's Tequila? Is he a hunter?". Sam choked on a laugh and held up three big yellow packs."I've got M&M's too!". "Awesome! Meet my second best friend Cas," Dean smiled proudly. Cas's eyes widened "You made friends with that? How did he get in there?". Sam burst out laughing so hard. Dean curled an arm around Cas's shoulder and dragged him to the couch, Sam joining a little bit later, bringing both Dean's 'best friends' with him. "So, what are we watching?"

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 03:41:22 UTC
"Dr.Sexy, MD." Dean smiled as he took one of the bottles.

Sam rolled his eyes and took the clicker. "No we are not. There's a special on the discovery channel I want to see."

Dean shook the bottle of tequila. "Helllooooo. We're not here to bulid brain cells!" He angrily changed the tv channel and took a large swig of tequila. "Damn." he coughed and passed the bottle back to Castiel who was starring at them mutely.

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cizi1410 November 17 2009, 03:50:30 UTC
Dean and Sam glared at Castiel, good grins plastered to their faces. "Go on!" Dean ushered.

Furrowing his brows, Castiel took Dean's lead and downed the Tequila until the bottle was empty.

Sam's eyes looked as if it was going to pop out. "Dean...you sure this is a good idea?"

"Relax Sam."

Sam gulped nervously as he watched Castiel coughing and choking on the liqour, while Dean happily patted the angel's back.

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 03:53:52 UTC
Castiel looked up at them with watering eyes. "What the fuck is this!"

Dean smiled proudly. "Holy water."

Sam laughed and then he looked at the bottle. "Hold up- where's the worm?"

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yohkowin_0124 November 17 2009, 04:08:17 UTC
"I think Cas swallowed."
Castiel looked at him with horror. "There was a worm in there?!"
Dean laughed. "Yep. Now is in your stomach."
"I'm going to vomit."
"Relax Cas. He's joking."

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 04:10:55 UTC
Sam squinted at the bottle and shook it. "I think so."
Castiel grabbed his head. "Oh my god... I haven't since the last time I was with the garrison..."
Castiel rolled around and fell over on the couch. Dean jumped up and shook him. "Buddy, are you alright?"
"Hrk.." Casitel grinned sloppily. "Gimmie a minute."

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cizi1410 November 17 2009, 04:13:12 UTC
"You lucky bastard Cas! You drank the worm!" Dean laughed.

"What worm?!" Castiel hiccuped. "Did you mean I'd just consumed a tiny innocent living being?" he asked, almost going into tears as he tugged at Dean's collar. "Did I just kill an innocent being?"

"Relax Cas, it's dead already." Sam took a small sip from another bottle.

"What? I ate a dead insect?!" Cas shot up to his feet, tumbling down to the couch again when he felt his knees going numb.

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yohkowin_0124 November 17 2009, 04:26:39 UTC
Castiel felt the fire burning in his chest." My mo-uth takes f'nny."
"Dean, I think he drank to much." Sam said looking at the angel with concern.
"Nah. That's how Tequila supposed to taste. Get me some salt and a lemon."
Sam went the kitchen and got the ingredients."Here."
"Okay Cas, need to taste some salt." he said taking the salt and bending over Castiel. The cap fell from the bottle and all the salt got into the angel's mouth."Oops!" Dean said.
"What the fuck!" Castiel yelled coughing

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 04:29:48 UTC
Castiel spit out whatever was left in his mouth and tore his trench coat off. "Damnit Dean. Why is it so hot in here!"

Dean looked at sam and shrugged. He turned back to Cas. "Uh, well..."

Castiel straightned himself and stretched out his wings. "That feels better slightly." The angel giggled.

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yohkowin_0124 November 17 2009, 04:42:33 UTC
"Uh, shiny!" Dean said poking at the wings.
"Knocked off!" Castiel complained.
"Can I've a feather?" Sam asked excited.
"Okay. as long you dont tickle me."
Sam hide it one hand behind his back and crossed his fingers."Cross my heart."

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 04:50:27 UTC
"Hey Cas" Dean said while blinking his eyes, "What's over there?"

Castiel fluttered his giant black sparkly wings as he curiously turned his head to look away.

As soon as he turned his head, Sam attacked with the feather.

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cizi1410 November 17 2009, 05:21:54 UTC
"What a sasquatch doing in here?!!" Castiel squinted at Sam's direction and giggled. "You're hairy." Hiccupping, he bend over to the coffee table, reaching the yellow packet of M&M's.
Sam missed and knocked Dean's face instead.

"What the hell Sam?!" Dean glowered, cupping his battered nose.

"Sorry, I missed!"

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yohkowin_0124 November 17 2009, 05:34:01 UTC
I don't like the colored ones" Castiel said throwing away all the M&M's with color, keeping the chocolate colored ones.
"Okay, now he's distracted. Let's do this!" Dean said to Sam.
"You go to the left, Im going to the right."

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 05:35:33 UTC
He flapped his wings happily, catching both of the approaching winchesters. They both flew backwards as the powerful wings caught them in their respective abdomens.

Sam groaned as he landed in the cabnient. Dean sighed as he landed on the couch.

They shared a telepathic glance and resumed their attack.

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cizi1410 November 17 2009, 06:21:36 UTC
Only this time, Dean attacked from the back with a blanket, wrapping the angel's wings, immobilizing them.

"Lookie!" Castiel held up a bunch of chocolate colored candies but stumbled to his back as Dean dragged him down to the floor. "Dean?"

"Ouff!" Dean groaned when Castiel landed on his abdomen. "Hurry up Sam!" Dean yelled through a clenched jaw.

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demonbloodadict November 17 2009, 06:47:22 UTC
Sam stood up, rubbing his aching side, and ran forward with the feather.

Castiel craned his neck to look backwards at Dean. "Why must you betray me so?!"

"Everything will be fine again." Dean winked.

Sam brought the feather down on the squirming angel. "noooo!" Casitel moaned.

Sam brushed the feather along his neck and down his chest. Castiel began to giggle furiously. "Guys! Stop it! You don't know what happens when I get tickled!"

"Oh come on," Sam smiled moving the feather rapidly, "what's the worst that could--"

**POOF**

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