Comments | demon_faith: FIC: Fealty (1/?)

demon_faith

FIC: Fealty (1/?) - Merlin/Arthur, PG-13

Oct 05, 2008 22:52

TITLE: Fealty - part 1
AUTHOR: Demon Faith
CATEGORY: Hurt/Comfort, Drama
PAIRING: Merlin/Arthur
RATING: PG-13
WORDS: 931
SUMMARY: A faithful and good servant is a real godsend; but truly 't is a rare bird in the land - Martin Luther ( Read more... )

merlin, fic

Comments 43

openskies October 5 2008, 22:14:19 UTC

YOU DID IT! AND I LOVE YOU. AND IT IS AWESOME.

You've got the voices perfectly too. I can really hear them saying what they're saying. I especially liked the line: "Don't catch anything," he said distastefully. "I don't need you dripping on me." Oh Arthur. ♥

*rubs hands together* Is it too soon to be badgering for more?! >.>

*DEMANDING*

Seriously. Well done. I love it. *BEAMS*

demon_faith October 5 2008, 22:19:06 UTC

Hee. Glad you like it, hon.

Well, I did watch Episode 3 today. And read all the fic. Might have to just keep watching and reading for, uh, "research purposes". ;)

Eeek! I have to study too! Maybe.

Thank you! There'll probably be more later in the week.

drjenny88 October 5 2008, 22:32:43 UTC

Eeek! I have to study too! Maybe.

Don't study... write more! Lol.
I really enjoyed this, you got the voices just right - I can totally see Arthur singlemindedly going after the deer and Merlin halfheartedly lagging behind him.

Brilliant.

Oh, did I mention: ♥

xx

demon_faith October 6 2008, 12:47:23 UTC

Ha - well, I'm currently replying to this instead of clearking patients, so I guess I'm already corrupted!

I think Arthur is capable of intense focus; I'm really looking forward to seeing some of it in next week's episode.

And thank you. :)

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clearillusion October 5 2008, 22:35:19 UTC

ARTHUR D:

More now plz.

demon_faith October 6 2008, 12:49:50 UTC

And you're probably the only one here who knows just how evil I can be... *grins*

Soon.

clearillusion October 6 2008, 20:18:32 UTC

Damn your evilness.

UNIVERSITY IS EATING MY WEEK. PLZ TO BE GIVING ME AN HOUR TO WRITE FIC.

_profiterole_ October 5 2008, 22:41:04 UTC

You can't stop here! You need to update this fic as soon as possible. This is awesome!

demon_faith October 6 2008, 12:50:48 UTC

*is evil* I will try to get something done soon. And thank you.

lupus_malus October 5 2008, 23:03:06 UTC

Nice start. I'll look out for more of this.

demon_faith October 6 2008, 12:51:47 UTC

Thank you. I hope to provide more soon.

fireopal_fic October 5 2008, 23:07:11 UTC

BRILLIANT.

More, now, please? *puppy dog eyes*

Loved the bit where Merlin compares his use of magic with Arthur's hunt... that was brilliant. They really are two equals at times, but in completely different areas :)

Also, the dripping comment? MADE OF WIN.

Plus, Arthur's whole myraid of inscrutable looks - gotta love 'em. He seems to have so many!

More? Pwetty pwease?

demon_faith October 6 2008, 12:54:10 UTC

Thank you. *blushes*

Soon! I promise, soon.

I think they really are 'two sides of the same coin'. Arthur is by no means stupid; he just has different focus to Merlin. And they're also both complete idiots in their own way.

Heh. Thanks.

Beneath the bravado, Arthur is a complete enigma. I'm not sure we've seen him be entirely honest yet. This show reminds me so much of Smallville!

Will work on it some more tonight. :)

fireopal_fic October 6 2008, 13:48:55 UTC

:D Yay!

Definitely - both idiots, both brilliant :) I can't believe it took me the last episode to properly realise that, but now it's so obvious >< I mean, Merlin can be a bit of a dick too, can't he? Or at least, thoughtless and rather arrogant...

I have never seen Smallville >< But yes, there's much more to Arthur than anyone is telling us...

Yay! I look forward to it...