Broken Hearts and Silver Tears CH 14

[demifan90]

Title: Broken Hearts and Silver Tears Ch14
Pairing: Demi/Selena
Rating: M for language, violence, kissing, or maybe nothing at all.  Again, being safe.
Summary: How Demi would carry on if the whole Selena/Nick rumor was true.
A/N: Okay so here is Chapter 14.  So I know Nick was a little bit out of character in the last chapter...okay maybe a lot.  I

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[coffeecommunity]

Thank you. Really. Just...thank you. So off to fic...you managed to combine this heart-wrenching pain with a good measure of hope in this chapter, and it really shines. The whole scene in the floor, when Demi is sobbing and not making sense, is absolutely beautiful. You can really feel Selena's desperation in her reassurances and in how tightly she holds Demi, like she's literally afraid to let her go. Her little rant is perfect because she acknowledges that she herself probably doesn't deserve Demi, but that she doesn't dwell on it because she has her and that's all that really matters. But I think it's Demi's honesty here, It's hard okay... it's hard to just make that stupid voice in my head disappear. I've been trying. I haven't thought it in a while. It's just...Nick...he-, that really gets me, because in many ways it's a daily battle to silence that voice, at least at first.

The whole Superman/Supergirl exchange is adorable, and their decision to tell their parents seems bittersweet because it probably won't end well. I love what Selena tells her, that she's ready to tell them that she's in love with this amazing girl they've always known, but never really have, if that makes sense. I loved the imagery of their hands over their hearts, and Demi's honesty that just because she was ready didn't mean she wasn't afraid just rang so true. The ending is perfect, because after that admission, there's nothing they can't get through. Great job.

[demifan90]

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