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delicatale

Up and down the waves in my heart - Steve/Danny - 1/1

Mar 29, 2011 08:08

Title: Up and down the waves in my heart
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Danny has finally caved, and how is this his life again?
Disclaimer: Don't own them, no harm intended, no profit made etc.
Word count: 3780
Author's note: So this is my first H50 fic, I really hope you enjoy! kapoosh_kapow has generously looked this over (as I was convincing ( Read more... )

h50, steve/danno

Comments 29

sunsaralyn March 29 2011, 07:21:21 UTC

Lovely work. One tiny formatting error, though. Your close on the italic here ... "... so fucking weak ... " is missing its opening bracket thingy. (The less than sign.) So, the rest of the piece is in italics. But this is a lovely, and very hot little work. Good stuff!

delicatale March 29 2011, 07:28:50 UTC

Oh, thanks for that! Completely missed it, it's now fixed. I'm glad you liked it! Was fun to write.

gehirnstuerm March 29 2011, 08:18:31 UTC

Hee! That was both adorable and hot. I loved Danny's bitching! ♥

delicatale March 29 2011, 08:24:10 UTC

\o/! I'm so glad you liked. I loved being in his head, I'm quite an angry person myself so it was terribly easy, but I was really afraid of missing the mark. Not the biggest fan of the ending, but I've got room for improvment!

gehirnstuerm March 29 2011, 08:32:45 UTC

I actually liked the ending a lot - felt nice and real, what with the boys sated and sleepy, postponing The Talk. *g*

Looking forward to more H50 fic from you! :D

delicatale March 29 2011, 08:48:17 UTC

Oh, *relief* ^^. Seeing how this flowed from me (I wrote it through my breaks at work), it's very possible I'll write more. It's just so annoying that the UK is so behind on airing the episodes (we just got 1.10)!

zortified March 29 2011, 11:01:24 UTC

This was awesome. I love how Danny tried surfing just because he couldn't say no to Steve and I loved seeing all the hints that Steve was in love with Danny as well.

delicatale March 29 2011, 11:20:29 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting <33. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

bi_nocturnal_g March 29 2011, 11:06:19 UTC

This is a perfect hot little piece of debauchement I enjoyed wholeheartedly. Thank you.

delicatale March 29 2011, 11:21:09 UTC

Ah, I'm liking this description! Thanks for reading and commenting :D.

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delicatale March 29 2011, 12:21:48 UTC

\o/! <3. So happy you liked it! Thanks for reading =D.

Oh, well then, here you go: http://www.johnnyikon.com/data/articles/2008/12/437/caan121208.jpg
^_^
(there are also pictures of him having a bit of an accident - a ~towel slip as they called it, when he was drying himself afterwards. Where you can see everything. The image is burnt in my memory.)