Comments | del_rion: Briefly Yours: New First Time

del_rion

Briefly Yours: New First Time

Mar 31, 2007 13:17

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fandom: queer as folk, character: brian kinney, character: justin taylor

Comments 5

corposant March 31 2007, 11:42:59 UTC

I like this a lot.

del_rion March 31 2007, 12:22:45 UTC

I'm very glad you do :)

Short things like this are always a risk (at least I think so) to a writer. But I will play around these at least for a moment longer, and try to come up with stuff that people might like :)

Thanks for commenting!

corposant March 31 2007, 12:43:16 UTC

I think you did a wonderful job in conveying a poignant moment with such limited words. I loved the way you contrasted Brain and Justin's first time to this moment, pointing out what has changed in a delicate and touching fashion.

nikki6 March 31 2007, 23:35:35 UTC

Very sweet, baby.

You know you're loved.

Cheers!

del_rion April 1 2007, 03:41:10 UTC

You could tell me that a little more often ;) Geezer...