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phaelas February 28 2007, 20:32:27 UTC
Oh I loved that! Very true to the character's voices. Present time isn't really my thing but you pulled it off well. ;)

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del_rion February 28 2007, 21:08:38 UTC
Why thank you so much!

It's always good to know you do at least two things well: the character voice, and the tense. Of course a good story is something worth aiming at, too, but you can't get that without the two mentioned ealier ;)

*hugses*

(oh, just so you can be "jealous" (maybe): we have 30StM's ABL in local stores now, here in Finland (big WOW). At least in one big one :D I don't know if I really like that or not, but oh well... :S All those teens being the fans of the band....)

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phaelas February 28 2007, 21:14:02 UTC
Yeah that's very true. I've not watched QAF in almost two years now, but I can just hear Brian and Julian talking, see them move, when reading this!

*hugs* =D

Haha we've had it in stores for quite a while now... I think. I don't really know. Or care. LOL I'm more jealous of all the FINNISH music in the stores around you. :P

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nikki6 March 1 2007, 02:51:08 UTC
Awesome job, Sunshine!

I like the way it ends, with Brian looking ahead. You painted Justin's youthful impatience perfectly.

Cheers!
Nik

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del_rion March 1 2007, 04:13:55 UTC
Well I guess I "know myself", and thus "know" how to write youthful impatience and all :P

So, thank you (geezer) XD For a first attempt, this isn't too horrible. I'll get better (that's the aim, anywya :P

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well bjgirlgh March 3 2007, 01:30:03 UTC
that wasnt bad and ur english is great and well can u write some thing longer ?but plz dont break justins heartt

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Re: well del_rion March 3 2007, 05:49:22 UTC
Thank you :) I know, this isn't really a... well, not a good story. Just some short little thing. I will write these for a moment, and then turn into bigger stories. I have such big projects on other fandoms that I want to write something neat and brief for a moment.

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