Witness of Love and Gods: Chapter 1

[del_rion]

Story Info

Title: Witness of Love and Gods

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Alexander the Great (movie)

Genre: Drama

Rating: M / FRM

Characters: Alexander, Bagoas, Cassander, Cleitus, Crateros, Hephaistion, Ptolemy

Pairings: Alexander/Hephaistion, Hephaistion/Ptolemy (implied Alexander/Roxanne, Ptolemy/Thais)

Summary

Comments

[teahousemoon83]

My dear,
I know I am late, very late in commenting this, but I hope you don't mind... I totally LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this fic. And I love your other fics as well, I love how you write in general!!! I think this fic has to be one of my favourite ever, I keep reading it and can't get enough!!!
Are you writing Alexander fics anymore?
Well done, you're amazing!!!
xxx

[del_rion]

Hi!

It's never too late, I think, when it comes to reading - and commenting, as long as the author is alive, of course... lol

I'm not writing Alexander fics at the moment, but that doesn't mean I won't write them in the future. I believe I have at least one fic planned, even, waiting to be written.

Thank you for adding me, and liking my writing ^^ Hopefully I'll manage to entertain you in the future as well!

[teahousemoon83]

I think you're really good particularly as you said that English is not your first language...congrats!! :D I particularly love the end of chapter 17...how you managed to show Alexander's jealousy without mentioning it once...I could almost touch it! I wish the chapter was longer :P wanted to know what happened between Alex and Phai after that (although I like your ending)...the tension was just amazing! :)
I'll be waiting.. :)
xx

[del_rion]

This was written so long ago (few years seem like forever), and I barely handled English language back then. But I'm always proud of my accomplishments when someone truly enjoys reading my stuff.

Glad you liked the chapter. Although in many ways, I think the final one will always be my favorite... ;)

[teahousemoon83]

wow! great job then :) i usually have some difficulties in reading about Hephaistion's death, but I liked your version, although it wasn't less sad :(
xx

[del_rion]

I like tragic death scenes, especially when they are good and emotional. :P Glad you liked my version, although I'm sure it isn't historically accurate in any way, hehe

[teahousemoon83]

could be.... you never know!!:D please please write more :)