Requiem

[del_rion]

Story Info

Title: Requiem

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Heroes

Era: Year 2050

Genre: Drama

Rating: K+ / FRC

Characters: Claire Bennet, Gretchen Berg, Gabriel Gray (Sylar), Peter Petrelli (, Micah Sanders)

Pairings: Peter/ Sylar, implied Claire/Gretchen

Summary: Peter wanted his old power back, went a little crazy and took

Comments

[dancingdragon3]

Great story. I like the conflict over Gretchen aging and Claire not (and Claire apparently ignoring that.) I would love to see more of that.

My favorite part was when Gabriel found Peter. Be still my heart. I could see it all playing it out, you wrote it that well, and I was thrilled when Gabriel initiated the kiss. Sigh. That was perfect!

[del_rion]

:D Thanks!

I wasn't sure if I dwelled enough on Gretchen and Claire's life and relationship, but I think I brought it to the surface enough to introduce the problem Claire will probably have with all her lovers in the future.

And oh yes, the scene with Gabriel tracking Peter down... it was nice :D They did spend so much time making those frozen scenes, and showing us how, so that I could not just let all that information go without using it once XD

Glad you liked!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[paynesgrey]

I really enjoyed this, from the way you portrayed the effect time has on Gretchen and her relationship with Claire, to Peter's spiritual journey and homecoming with Sylar. Wonderful job.

[del_rion]

Glad you liked! I felt a bit like I didn't focus well enough on all of those things, but I suppose I did a good enough job :D