Heroes of Tomorrow -1- Siren Call

[del_rion]

Story Info

Title: Heroes of Tomorrow

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Heroes

Era: Post season 4

Genre: Action, drama

Rating: M / FRM

Characters: Claire Bennet, Noah Bennet, Edgar, Ando Masahashi, Hiro Nakamura, Peter Petrelli, Micah Sanders, Mohinder Suresh, Sylar, Molly Walker (+ various other Heroes characters)

Summary:

Comments

[paynesgrey]

Ooh, this is a really good start to a larger story! I'm already enjoying the direction it's going. I've been longing for some post series 4 fanfic, and I'm kinda intrigued by your choice to make it seem like Claire's "stunt" wasn't that big of a deal to the world. That actually makes a lot of logical sense.

Looking forward to more! Great work.

[del_rion]

It's kind of funny because I forgot about Claire's stunt when I first started to write this. So I came to a conclusion that maybe the world is still holding its breath a little when it comes to those special people... we'll see where I decide to take it in the end.

Glad you liked this! I kind of felt like I should have added something else to make it stand out more, but... it was a relaxed little way to start this fic.

Thanks for reading and dropping a comment! :)

[del_rion]

haha, you're free to come and read whenever I get around to write the next chapter (as of now, I have no idea what I'm going to write in it... perhaps more superhero costume debates...) :P

Maybe they'll go with kinky leather instead of spandex.

Glad you liked, thanks for reading and commenting!

[thegreyhawke]

This is interesting, I'd like to see it continue. Of course I have to comment on the 'uniforms/suits' and say that I like your idea of kinky leather much better!
"You won't catch me running around in a cape--zipping around with my underwear outside my pants?"-Peter Petrelli, S1.

[del_rion]

Ah, your comment gently reminds me that I have to re-watch the show ASAP! I didn't even remember Peter saying that ;) But I don't think any of them would be willing to go down with those old-fashioned suits - well, perhaps Hiro would, but he's so excited about the whole thing anyway that he won't be picky about the suits XD

Glad you enjoyed this first part! Hopefully I'll get around to writing more soon.

[amles80]

Oh, I really like this! It feels very believable to me, I like how you have captured the voices of the characters.

[del_rion]

Thank you! I always feel like I did a good job if people "recognize" the characters ^^