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del_rion

Wondering About Distance

Dec 03, 2008 15:10

Story Info

Title: Wondering About Distance

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Heroes

Era: Season 1

Genre: General

Rating: K+ / FRC

Characters: Peter Petrelli, Claude Rains (, Nathan Petrelli)

Summary: Peter ought to be sleeping, but his mind has more important things to do - like wonder about Claude, and his teaching methods.
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fandom: heroes, character: peter petrelli, character: claude rains

Comments 9

indyhat December 4 2008, 19:24:16 UTC

Heh - cute. And your English is really very good!

del_rion December 4 2008, 20:43:08 UTC

Haha, this whole mess has been through my good beta, but... thanks ^^ I take all the credit I can!

lotus0kid December 4 2008, 20:30:42 UTC

Nice! Poor Peter, I don't think he'll ever understand Claude's teaching style.

del_rion December 4 2008, 20:44:17 UTC

Mwhahah, maybe future!Peter will? Damn, wouldn't it be a scene, him and Claude together... yummy. (though it could be Claude didn't like his Poodle anymore, with the scar and attitude and all... *muses*)

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del_rion December 5 2008, 12:14:26 UTC

Writing Heroes has been long in the making - ever since I first started to watch the show, summer 2007 I think, I knew that one of these days I would also start writing in the fandom. Tried to delay that as long as possible, but as we can see, I didn't quite manage ^^

Glad you liked, thanks for commenting! *s*

trueroyalty December 8 2008, 08:00:38 UTC

Excellent wording; even though it was short, you were able to make a complete-feeling fic and kept beautiful grammar, punctuation use, and phrasing. Very glad I took the time to read this. Thanks for sharing it & I hope we see more from you! :D

~TR

del_rion December 8 2008, 08:05:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad, naturally, that you took the time to read this, and thought of the fic so positively.

I would assume that there will be more from me, especially if I keep writing for (heroes_contest). I hope I'll get into more... "usual" fics soon, not just ones like this, though I must say, it's nice to explore one's limits sometimes ^^

cruiscin_lan December 10 2008, 01:50:15 UTC

Tonight, he wonders about distance; not the kind you can count with a ruler, from point A to point B, but the strange kind you can’t quite grasp, as if it’s eluding you all the time, but is still there.

This is my favorite part. It's all lovely, though.

del_rion December 10 2008, 09:00:56 UTC

Mmm, yeah, that is a good line. I rather like it too. :D Thanks for reading, and dropping a comment ^^