Taking Back Sunday -- Chapter 2

[dejectedmadness]

[Title] Taking Back Sunday
[Author] dejectedmadness
[Rating] Eventually NC-17. This chapter… PG for possible cursing.
[Chapter Listing] 1 2/?
[Disclaimer] I am posting fanFICTION. Neither the characters nor the ideas belong to me, just the plot specific to this story. No profit is being made off of this fiction, it is being written solely for my entertainment and

Comments

[moshimoshix3]

I know the song I know the song, ahh! *dances* (Yes, this has just made my entire day).

The line is "...two cents? Boy, daydreams come cheap these days." And it's from "Museums" by The Rookie Lot.

Yeah, I'm amazing (Well, a little bit anyway ^.-').

I'm still pretty useless in the comments department...but I really, really like this. I'm totally getting into it. And John? Yeah, I really still think he wants to get in Jesse's pants. (And even if he doesn't, he is right that Brian is a little on the asshole side. He makes me laugh, but he really is an ass, haha).

I really wish I could say something, well...better. I apologize for wasting your life with these lame comments. I've lost my comment mojo =\

[dejectedmadness]

Good call. You know, the first time I heard that song was the day I wrote that chapter? I downloaded it and had every other song twice, it seems, but that one was the one I didn't listen to. So I HAD to fit it in somewhere. So yeah, you can have something superspecialwonderfulnice and maybe sexual favours if you want :D haha. I'm not sure what I can give you. I could mail you a cookie. Or make you an icon or something. Lemme know what you want and I will do my best.

As for lame comments? I think lame comments are just fine, and I'm glad you like it so much. I hope to get more into the Jesse/Brian dynamic in the next chapter. John needs more story time, too, though. Hmmm. Dilemma. Well... we'll see how it goes.

[dejectedmadness]

Ooooh you KNOW the members of Rookie Lot. I probably just should have looked it up, and actually, I probably knew that at one point. But oh well.

I'm glad you like the story. I agree that there should be more Brian fics. But really, there is a lack of any fic with Brand New-non-Jesse members, so... we should try to fix that.

Thanks for commenting!

[suckerforjesse]

Ace!
Please update soon!

[dejectedmadness]

I will try. Thanks!

[mememechant]

eeeek.
new chapter!
you made me happy. :D yayy!
the banter between jesse and brian is amusing.
but I miss john, haha. he needs more scenes!
I really like this story.
update soon!

[dejectedmadness]

More on John in the next chapter, which I meant to post yesterday, but which still isn't finished. I suck. Soon though.

[dejectedmadness]

And also thanks for reading! Ha! How quickly I lose my manners when I have just woken up.