story continued...

[dejayoubrandnew]

Three lunches, 2 dinner dates and a movie later I decided it was time to attempt to tell her how I felt again. This time I picked a spot that she couldn't possibly have a sappy sad story attached to it. I took her to the fair grounds near the junk-car heap. " Um hun what are we doing here?" She asked looking around the piles of scrap metal. I didn'

Comments

[x_hand_grenade]

its a pretty good story. but in reality no girl is that much of a sap. and if she knew he had to tell her sumin then she'd be all over it like any girl.

[dyingtocry]

actually... yea... some girls are that much of a sap... and she you can tell she definitely knows whats up... otherwise, she wouldn't keep bringing up all those sappy moments.

[x_hand_grenade]

oh shut the fuck up. maybe you are a sappy girl, thats why u concur.

[mike_q_gerson]

maybe you should just read the damn story and not criticize it. its a good story, it doenst matter how the girl would react to him having to tell her something, in this story she starts talking about old memories, when you write your own story you can have her jump on his news like mexicans on a borrito.

[x_hand_grenade]

i do write my own fucking stories. and if she wants it to be a good story she has to take in everyones opinion, EVEN if she doesnt agree. thats what a good writer does. and that thing about mexicans yeah you are obviously still childish to say some stupid shit like that. and its really none of you business what i said about the story. because i left the comment for JESS, not YOU or the other girl. so get over and quit replying to my comments.

[dejayoubrandnew]

Oi I love you sam.................... and I do take in everyones opinion....... I just write what I want to.............