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SPN Fic: Show Me How You Do That Trick

Nov 27, 2011 08:38

Title: Show Me How You Do That Trick
Author: deirdre_c
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~9,000
Warnings: Underage (Jared is 17), humans with canine characteristics, knotting
Author's Note: Special thanks forever to both cherie_morte and poor_choices for the fabulous beta help over the busy holiday weekend. So much helpful guidance from them, all remaining mistakes ( Read more... )

rps, supernatural fic

Comments 174

wendy November 27 2011, 14:20:26 UTC

GAH!! I haven't wanted to KEYSMASH this much after reading a fic in a long, long time.

I love that you took what has become a standard trope and still twisted it into a brand new idea. Jensen begging...COME ON. *fans self* And Jared saying "show me how" is off-the-charts sexy. Good gracious.

Except for the sexy bits (MY FAVORITES), this feels so much like a YA novel, which I mean as a compliment. I want to read about their adventures here, together, in this universe, FOREVER.

deirdre_c November 27 2011, 20:53:31 UTC

Oh Wendy, thank you SO MUCH. Your "YA novel" comment just about made me fall out of my chair as I flailed with delight (since as far as I'm concerned you are about as close to an expert on that genre as I will ever meet). What an amazing thing to say. I can't even... GAH!!!! /o\

And yes, in my mind they go on to have all kinds of wacky clandestine assignment shenanigans, and always come back to the school for more dorm room sex. :D

big_heart_june November 27 2011, 14:40:59 UTC

Oh man, you're brilliant, THIS is absolutely brilliant! Such an awesome knotting fic! ugh, such a kink of mine. How insane is growly possessive Alpha!Jared-in-heat???! oh my god....and then needy begging Omega!Jensen..I think I died a little.....

LOVE ALL THE WAY. ♥ thanks so much, hon. ♥

deirdre_c November 27 2011, 20:56:07 UTC

YAYAYAY!! *twirls* I'm so excited that you liked it, June! Especially if you are a knotting aficionado! I felt like I was wading into dangerous waters trying to take on a trope with so much history in the fandom. So, so happy that it worked for you this way. :)

obstinatrix November 27 2011, 15:15:29 UTC

OMG. *squiggles of joy* Omg, okay, this is brilliant. I love it when the knotting mythos, such as it is, is expanded and altered and subverted and utilised by writers and you have used it so wonderfully here, I love your world building. The sex is hot and Jared and Jensen are adorable ('pup'! omg --) but the best part, genuinely, is -- well, the whole thing, but specifically the whole concept of this universe. I love it.

deirdre_c November 27 2011, 21:00:32 UTC

SO. MUCH. GLEE. over your comment!!!! \o/ \o/ \o/

Oh darlin'. It means so much to me to hear that you liked the story and the concept and how it turned out. (omg 'pup' I don't know if people have used that nickname in knotting/werewolf fic before, but once it came to me, I was IN LOVE WITH IT! *g*)

Thank you for your enthusiasm and for your kind comments. ♥

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deirdre_c November 27 2011, 21:02:29 UTC

Heeehee! YOU CANNOT ESCAPE! I WILL NOT LET YOU!!! *glomps*

Your keymash absolutely makes my day!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR READING! ♥

altruisticinteg November 27 2011, 15:35:33 UTC

I'll be in my bunk! (sorry Firefly marathon yesterday.)

Geez. This was HOT! There has been only a few knotting fics that were recc'd to me and this was the first one I've read on my own. I will definitely read any sequels that comes from this! *hint*hint*

;-)

deirdre_c November 27 2011, 21:11:44 UTC

FF FTW!

And yay! Thank you so much! I'm so excited to hear that you were willing to take a chance on the story sight unseen and I'm even more excited to hear that you liked it!! I can't promise any sequels, but you never know. I certainly left a ton of loose ends about their lives and future that I would love to spin out. :)