Playing Games

Jun 30, 2008 08:11

My latest still_grrr ficlet.
Written for the prompt “Spin The Bottle”.
Playing Games )

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snowpuppies June 30 2008, 17:34:16 UTC
Oh, nice. The 'spin the bottle' thing fits in so nicely here...it's just very well put together! And it so works with this stage in Willow's life.

Kudos!

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deird1 June 30 2008, 20:10:59 UTC
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it!

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a2zmom June 30 2008, 22:55:40 UTC
Love the metaphor here. That she's only just playing a game and it's not her fault if it lands on Xander this one time.

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deird1 June 30 2008, 22:59:19 UTC
Willow's very good at making excuses for herself, isn't she?

Glad you liked this!

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dreamincolor July 1 2008, 09:05:51 UTC
Very nice.

It’s going to land on Oz again - of course it will, he’s her boyfriend after all - but she knows that already. So there’s no harm in just checking.

Great use of metaphor - it just fits so perfectly. The way Willow convinced herself that it wasn't her fault and it wasn't on purpose, and that she won't do it again was spot on for her at that time.

Great work hon!

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deird1 July 1 2008, 22:46:57 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it!

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hello_spikey July 9 2008, 20:39:39 UTC
aaaw, beautiful and touching and very Willow. A lovely way of really going into her life, as it was in high school, and her conflicted emotions about both boys.

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deird1 July 9 2008, 22:11:04 UTC
Thank you.

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deird1 March 26 2009, 23:26:00 UTC
Thanks!

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