Comments | defyingnormalcy: "Penance" Adama/Roslin fic

defyingnormalcy

"Penance" Adama/Roslin fic

May 27, 2011 21:45

Title: Penance
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Rating: MA - for desk!sex
Disclaimer: I wish that I owned BSG but I don't.
A/N: written for the bsg_kink porn fest tonight. The prompts were, "Laura/Bill, legs, wet, Presidential desk, first time, comfort sex." In my mind, this is their reunion scene that we were cheated out of after Laura and the others were rescued from ( Read more... )

bill adama, fanfic, laura roslin, bsg_kink fic, adama/roslin, bsg

Comments 13

akachankami May 28 2011, 01:56:20 UTC

yes, pleaase, never stop writing porn!
and he clung to her nonsensical ramblings and her half formed words as they made up the scripture of his heart. ♥

defyingnormalcy May 28 2011, 01:57:05 UTC

LOL. I'll endeavour to write more Adama/Roslin porn, hehe. Thank you.

miabicicletta May 28 2011, 02:15:52 UTC

Oh my god. This is...stunning. Amazing job, lady. I can't believe the hotness and the sweetness and just the pure emotion that is evidenced here. It's breathtaking.

Gorgeous work. Seriously. I wish I had half the ability to write smut as you do.

defyingnormalcy May 28 2011, 03:15:39 UTC

Thank you, I am very humbled by your comment. I am glad that the emotional intimacy resonated with you; I wanted that to stand out just as much, if not more than the actual smut. :)

hugamoose May 28 2011, 02:23:10 UTC

Very Hot, I would take a welcome like that anytime
I agree you can keep writing as much porn as you like!!!

defyingnormalcy May 28 2011, 03:16:21 UTC

Thank you. And yes, that is indeed, a wonderful way to be welcomed by someone.

Hehe, I shall certainly aim to write more Adama/Roslin smut :P

nixmom May 28 2011, 02:25:10 UTC

“I forgive you.” She breathed, knowing in her heart that those three words meant more to him than a literal confession of her love.

THIS! You have spoken truth and I must bow down before it.

Very nicely done dear. I loved it. So beautiful , gritty and sweet.

defyingnormalcy May 28 2011, 03:18:30 UTC

Thank you hon. I actually had that line written for WEEKS. It came to me one day while I was on the streetcar, but I didn't know where to use it. Thankfully it was appropriate for this prompt. :)

somadanne May 28 2011, 02:56:27 UTC

I said it to you on bsg_kink already, but I love this line so much:

“I love you.” I love you. I love you. I love you. The words fell in time with each kiss he bestowed onto her flesh.

You just have to know he told her that many, many times.

And yay for you for writing such a hot reunion scene. :D

defyingnormalcy May 28 2011, 03:14:26 UTC

Thank you! Always lovely to hear feedback, twice. :)

And yes, I agree with you, he most definitely said those words to her several times. :)