"Discretion" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

Nov 21, 2013 20:44

Title: Discretion
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor
Rating: T
Word Count: 1, 095 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show
A/N: This was written for kayryn who prompted me during an email exchange. Takes place during 1x05 Citizen's Arrest; Andrea is caught admiring said divine blouse.

Discretion )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

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kayryn November 22 2013, 01:56:39 UTC
Meeep! I'm so happy you wrote this and OMG, I love flustered!Andrea and amused!Sharon so, so much. I swear, every time I read the line "Slow is good. I can do slow.” I have the biggest grin on my face. Gaaaaaah! My heart can't take all the cute. Thank you, for writing this. It's perfect. <3

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defyingnormalcy November 22 2013, 23:54:58 UTC
Okay I admit, it was a pretty fabulous prompt that you gave me. Hehe.

"Slow is good. I can do slow.”

Slow is good. Slow, thoughtful, methodic, purposeful; Andrea is more than capable of all these things as Sharon will come to learn. ;)

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o_banaa November 22 2013, 02:41:43 UTC
Flustered and caught-red-handed Andrea is so so adorable! :D

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defyingnormalcy November 22 2013, 23:55:35 UTC
I think that she is quote adorable as well. And she's certainly a ton of fun to write, especially when Sharon is the one to catch her.

Thanks for reading. :)

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lanalucy November 22 2013, 03:01:11 UTC
All that UST...mmmmm.

Love that rush of discovery when interest is returned, and everyone's looking at each other with newly aware eyes.

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defyingnormalcy November 22 2013, 23:58:43 UTC
Writing UST is deliciously fun, perhaps even more fun than watching it in film/television, so I'm glad that you enjoyed that bit of UST.

Thanks for reading. :)

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sharon_ray November 22 2013, 05:42:02 UTC
What did you even do. ♥

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defyingnormalcy November 22 2013, 23:59:39 UTC
Moi? ;)

We both know that Andrea was fully enjoying that lovely view that Sharon's blouse provided.

I see that DDA McJudgey icon that you're using. Ahem.

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sharon_ray November 23 2013, 05:34:32 UTC
Oh I used it alright. What now?! ;-p

Supppppeeeerrrrr cute story, my darling! I love it!

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defyingnormalcy November 23 2013, 05:43:15 UTC
Bahaha. You win this icon round. ;) :P

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afrakaday November 22 2013, 14:28:09 UTC
"Softly smirking Sharon" is my new favorite alliteration. :)
This was a lovely homage to the blouse of distraction and to Hobbs' awesomeness! Also Rusty is utilized perfectly here, haha. This was just the thing to whet my appetite for Monday.

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defyingnormalcy November 23 2013, 00:01:42 UTC
"Softly smirking Sharon" is my new favorite alliteration. :)

OMG. I didn't even realize that I had done that, haha!

Rusty is sometimes the perfect matchmaker without ever trying! I do enjoy trying to work him into shippy fics, even if the plot doesn't revolve around him, simply because I like to acknowledge what a big part of Sharon's life he has become.

I'm glad to have been able to provide some funtimes to get you ready for Monday; thanks for reading! :)

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