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defyingnormalcy

"Enigma (13/16)" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

Oct 29, 2013 11:50

Title: Enigma (13/16)
Co-author: sharon_ray
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor
Rating: T
Word Count: 1,628
Disclaimer: Not our characters or television show
Summary: Sharon and Andrea's relationship has been balanced on the precipice of friendship and something more for longer than either of them care to admit. Will the ever-present danger of their jobs finally push them ( Read more... )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

Comments 10

newnumbertwo October 29 2013, 20:16:52 UTC

OMGs! Love movie night with this family. Rusty's reaction is so sweet. And I love that they fell asleep, cuddling like puppies. Favorite image ever. ♥ ♥ ♥

Love the negotiation at the end. Pancakes with Rusty sounds like a wonderful way to celebrate their first sleepover.

♥ ♥ ♥

defyingnormalcy October 30 2013, 16:15:09 UTC

OMGs! Love movie night with this family.

I had hoped that you would! :) We really wanted to ease Andrea into the idea that Sharon is now a package deal, she comes with two biological children but also a foster son. We really wanted to give this family the time they needed to grow and become comfortable with one another.

Thanks for reading. :)

o_banaa October 30 2013, 12:02:23 UTC

I'm terrible at commenting, but I love this story so much!

I really like that they aren't jumping into relationship, how considerate they are of one another and the overall adorableness is 'killing me softly' :D

defyingnormalcy October 30 2013, 16:16:55 UTC

We're so glad that you are enjoying this fic! :)

I really like that they aren't jumping into relationship, how considerate they are of one another

Thank you! It was super important to us that they not jump into things after their first fumbled attempt. We really wanted them to approach it differently this time, and to be super mindful of one another and their past.

Thanks so much for reading. :)

lindy999 October 31 2013, 00:38:11 UTC

I realized what day it was and opened LJ and started frantically scrolling looking for this :). Goes to read!!!

defyingnormalcy October 31 2013, 00:39:02 UTC

Aww! I schedule the posts for around 12pm EST, just so you know for next time! Enjoy the chapter. :)

lindy999 October 31 2013, 00:48:04 UTC

OMG you just love torturing us don't you? Meany ;)

defyingnormalcy October 31 2013, 00:51:07 UTC

Torture? But this was a happy chapter! LOL!

lindy999 October 31 2013, 02:02:50 UTC

Lol yes it was very happy but you know what I'm waiting for...hehehehe ;)

defyingnormalcy October 31 2013, 02:22:03 UTC

All of you just want the smut! Hahaa! Well, the rating will change. Soon. Hehe.