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"Life's a Beach (1/4)" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic (sequel to Catch the Wave)

Jul 17, 2013 11:05

Title: Life's a Beach (1/4) - sequel to Catch the Wave (it's necessary to read this first!)
Co-author: sharon_ray
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor, Rusty,
Rating: T
Word Count: 2, 375
Disclaimer: Not our characters or television show
A/N: rococoms is at it again, sending us irresistible prompts! This time she asked for: Follow up fic. Rusty stressed about trial. Sharon ( Read more... )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

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obsessive_a101 July 17 2013, 20:35:04 UTC

Aww... and it was all so warm and cuddly and cute too... *tries to lure out uber-cautious!kitty!Sharon from her little corner with some apple-pie-flavored treats*

I agree though, they need a break - all of this stuff is turning them into stress-balls. That said, while reading that first section regarding Andrea and her sense of protectiveness, I do wonder how she'd have reacted to recent events (namely Jackson and the 'little' bully Lewis who not only insulted Rusty horribly but also *cough* possibly hit on Sharon *cough* (seriously though, am I nuts, or was that "How old are you?" line just the slightest bit... uhmm... oddly toned (that and the way his gaze went on her)? ><" I might be crazy).

newnumbertwo July 17 2013, 21:12:28 UTC

Re: bully Lewis: I totally heard that tone and caught that gaze. *nods* Also, I'm glad Sanchez showed him no mercy.

obsessive_a101 July 19 2013, 15:54:33 UTC

Yes, I loved that for once Sanchez wasn't too distracted by Emma (and it looks like there will be even more tension in the next episode) - that always throws me off a bit/feels out of character when he gets distracted from his job because of her. (^_^)"

defyingnormalcy July 18 2013, 15:48:55 UTC

This is happy!fic. Happy, happy, happy! (Because sometimes you just need that!) I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far.

That said, while reading that first section regarding Andrea and her sense of protectiveness, I do wonder how she'd have reacted to recent events

This fic is AU in that Jackson and Sharon are properly divorced and he doesn't crash at her place whenever the hell he feels like it, nor does he come after her for her hard-earned money to co-sigh leases, etc. In regards to the Lewis thing, I can imagine that Andrea would have made sure (were she the prosecutor) that he would have gotten the maximum sentence possible for a boy his age. And yes, that kid creepily hit on Sharon. And it was gross. :(

Thanks for reading! Chapter two will be up tomorrow. :)

obsessive_a101 July 19 2013, 15:55:54 UTC

*does a happy dance because I LOVE happy!!!*

YES! Because I didn't want him intruding at all. *huggles the both of them* and *shudders*. Ah, I'm glad I wasn't imagining it... :)

defyingnormalcy July 19 2013, 16:01:28 UTC

YES! Because I didn't want him intruding at all. *huggles the both of them* and *shudders*. Ah, I'm glad I wasn't imagining it... :)

No, no dear, you were not imagining it. Jackson is very deliberately left out of the fic.

(I'm speaking only for myself right now) I cannot write him, his personality and addictions are very triggering for me as I have a close family member who is almost exactly like him, and he has caused a great deal of hurt for me personally and my family. So, I will never write him into a fic. I just can't do it without being reminded very much of this family member of mine, and those are memories/realities I'd rather not experience while writing fic (which is supposed to be my fun hobby). :)

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