"Les Amours" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

Jun 20, 2013 16:53

Title: Les Amours
Co-Author: sharon_ray
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor
Rating: M, for sex
Word Count: 8, 640 words
Disclaimer: Not our characters or television show
A/N: sharon_ray approached me for a beta on this fic, and invited me to help her write it; many thanks to her for inviting me to be a part of this.
Summary: The four stages of love, friendship, affection, romance, ( Read more... )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

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newnumbertwo June 21 2013, 00:24:34 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ They're so happy and in love. And the transition at each stage is so seamless and natural. Also, you know I love the happy family they have with Rusty. So very sweet and wonderful. I really needed to read this today. Thanks, ladies. Lovely work.

♥ ♥ ♥

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sharon_ray June 21 2013, 01:34:11 UTC
Aw! Glad you liked it!!! Thanks for reading it!! ♥

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defyingnormalcy June 21 2013, 04:18:16 UTC
They're so happy and in love.

That's how we like them! ♥

So glad you enjoyed this, it was a joy to write the evolution of their relationship and of their family dynamic.

Thanks for reading! :D

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obsessive_a101 June 21 2013, 01:50:26 UTC
Aww... this was just, such a beautiful fic, and the semi-step-by-step overview we receive... *sobs* It's... wonderful. It's - basically amazing. And magical...

And just full of love! *huggles both of you for this story*

I love the insight we get into each of their lives, and the way they view each other. *sighs happily and contentedly*

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defyingnormalcy June 21 2013, 04:19:24 UTC
It was a fun challenge to write them grow from friends to lovers, to co-parents and partners. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, as we certainly enjoyed writing it!

Thanks for reading! :D

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sharon_ray June 21 2013, 04:21:29 UTC
Yes, everything she said! It was fun to contemplate how they navigated each step in the process of their relationship. So glad you enjoyed reading! We had good fun writing it together! ♥

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larsfarm77 June 22 2013, 14:34:10 UTC
Absolutely lovely work guys. The progression of their relationship was so nice to read!

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defyingnormalcy June 22 2013, 16:46:20 UTC
Thanks! So glad you liked it. It was a real treat to explore how the relationship would have changed over time. Thanks for reading. :D

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sharon_ray June 22 2013, 16:53:03 UTC
D'awww. Thanks so much for reading! So glad you liked it! Thanks for the lovely comment!

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margaux_margo May 6 2014, 13:59:42 UTC
Well done ( ... )

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defyingnormalcy May 6 2014, 14:12:28 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for leaving such a thoughtful review.

Taking us through these stages made each step all the more precious and believable. I savored each development.

I'm so glad, we really wanted to give each stage the attention it deserved.

Such a sweet exchange, honest in the moment, not fully in love but definitely infatuated.

That was definitely the emotion that we were hoping to get across. Not quite love yet, but definitely on the brink of love.

Rusty doesn't just accept his parents, he embraces them as the family he is grateful to have.

Absolutely, and we really wanted him to be able to have that family, and to be able to grow to love and appreciate them so fully.

Thanks again for your super kind comment, we're so glad that you enjoyed this fic. :)

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ext_4680240 June 16 2018, 08:56:47 UTC
I almost cried in the end. You are a very talented writer, the way you build the story around the characters and the characters around the story. Thanks so much for indulging us as readers with this fic 💖👠. Hope to read more!

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