"Body Work (1/3)" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

[defyingnormalcy]

Title: Body Work (1/3)
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor
Rating: T (will change later)
Word Count: 2, 096 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show.
A/N: This one was a real team effort. Thanks so much to the following lovely ladies for their betas and encouragement throughout the writing process: rococoms larsfarm77 redrockcan and surena_13 .Oh, and thanks to rococoms for the prompt "they

Comments

[obsessive_a101]

Awww... poor Sharon, although I do have to wonder if this problem is as one-sided as she believes it is. :3 Hmm...

You may just kill me with this fic. LOL

[defyingnormalcy]

although I do have to wonder if this problem is as one-sided as she believes it is. :3 Hmm...

Well, chapter two will be posted tomorrow, so you won't have to wait long to find out! ;)

It is interesting to explore the side of Sharon that isn't so self-assured. I'm glad that you're enjoying this.

Thanks for reading :D

[trixxification]

Ohhh fuck me dead (I dunno if y'all have that expression over your way).
I will return with meaningful comments once I've recovered.

[trixxification]

Okay, here goes: weeeee, alliteration.

" Andrea didn’t reach for the weights, but instead pushed Sharon down on the bench, her mouth was hot and wet and her hands were everywhere at once on Sharon’s naked body" Girl, you and me both!

"“It’s nice,” she said lamely, “it brings out your eyes.”" Awww, Sharon you so cute!

I just can't even with this fic.

This was just perfect.

[defyingnormalcy]

I finally started posting!!!

We did get glimpses of adorable!Sharon this season, so it was fun to write more moments like that. I'm glad that you're enjoying this.

Thanks for reading. :D

[defyingnormalcy]

Yes, we do have expressions like that here. :P ;) Hehee.

[fragrantwoods]

So funny and sweet to see cool, collected Sharon so discombobulated being around Andrea :-) And I love the idea of Gavin's engagement party! The gym is such a great place for Sharon to run into her crush...can't wait for more.

[defyingnormalcy]

It was a lot of fun to write Sharon outside of her comfort zone. She's a very confident woman and I really wanted to write something exploring her insecurities. But also I didn't want to make that awful mistake of writing strong women as weaklings, I'm hoping that I've found a balance between the assertive!Sharon and the vulnerable!Sharon. It's been a wonderful challenge for me. :)

So glad that you're enjoying this, there is more to come tomorrow. So stay tuned! :P

Thanks for reading. :)

[o_banaa]

Poor, poor Sharon. Having a crush is a terrible thing (imo), ecpecially when you feel that your feelings are one sided.

At the same time I get a kick from watching Sharon being flustered.

Can't wait for more.

[defyingnormalcy]

Unrequited love is just awful, I agree! :( But it's also really wonderful to write, as is flustered!Sharon.

Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Thanks for reading! :D

[marzipanilla]

Oh, but it is such sweet torture. Mhm.

Glad the prompt inspired a longer story, can't wait to read the rest :)

[defyingnormalcy]

Sweet, delicious torture indeed. ;)

I'm glad that you're enjoying this - the second (and longest) chapter is going to be posted tomorrow.

Thanks for reading :D