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defyingnormalcy

"The Best Part of Waking Up" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

Feb 22, 2013 23:39

Title: The Best Part of Waking Up
Paring: Hobbs/Raydor
Rating: R
Word Count: 395 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show.
A/N: Written as a sequel to redrockcan 's Good To the Last Drop . Basically, she wrote a tassimo!fic and I could not help but think up a short sequel as I was beta reading her fic. Thanks to redrockcan for letting me play in her ( Read more... )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

Comments 10

kouw February 23 2013, 08:54:55 UTC

Lovely fic, very atmospheric. It feels like it's still early in their affair/relationship. Sad about that coffee though...

defyingnormalcy February 23 2013, 16:53:53 UTC

In my mind, it's their first morning after, so yes super early in their relationship. :) That's okay, Andrea has now mastered how to use the Tassimo thanks to Sharon, so when they're ready to emerge from bed they'll just make another cup. :P ;)

Thanks for reading. :)

akachankami February 23 2013, 10:15:37 UTC

and MORE coffee porn! SPILLING COFFEE IS SINFUL XD
seriously not my ship but hey there's coffee! =P

defyingnormalcy February 23 2013, 16:55:39 UTC

See? Just look at what redrockcan started!

Thanks for reading. :)

fragrantwoods February 23 2013, 12:30:05 UTC

So loving and domestic! So nice to see the characters happy like this:-)

defyingnormalcy February 23 2013, 16:56:37 UTC

It was fun to write them being cute and cuddly in bed. :P I like making them happy with sweet, sweet, loving, and of course, coffee! :P

Thanks for reading. :D

larsfarm77 February 24 2013, 04:26:32 UTC

Sweet and sexy -- I still love the image of Hobbs and the coffee machine, loved Sharon's opening comment!!

defyingnormalcy February 24 2013, 04:49:24 UTC

As soon as redrockcan sent me her fic for beta, the plot of this little ficlet started nagging me! I could not help but write a sequel because hers was just so awesome. I'm glad that you enjoyed this - sassy!Sharon was fun to write.

Thanks for reading! :D

newnumbertwo February 24 2013, 20:26:08 UTC

This was so much fun! I love playful sassy Sharon. It's so nice to see her and Andrea so relaxed and content. And yay for more coffee!porn. This just became a favorite sub-genre of fanfic for me.

defyingnormalcy February 24 2013, 21:43:34 UTC

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! Writing these two enjoying one another, and being playful, is such fun. :D I adore sassy!Sharon. Hehee! Yes, redrockcan has coined a new phrase! Coffee!porn, haha!

Thanks for reading. :)