"As We Go Along" - Adama/Roslin Drabble

Apr 05, 2012 23:30

Title: As We Go Along
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Rating: M
Word Count: 300 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show.
A/N: Written for the "abstinence" prompt at ar_drabbles. Many thanks to nixmom for her beta and title.

As We Go Along )

bill adama, fanfic, laura roslin, adama/roslin, bsg

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redrockcan April 6 2012, 03:52:22 UTC
Hee hee!! Great use of the prompt!! I love these intimate conversations. Bill is so sweet and just takes things as they come and I love Laura trying to change the subject after leading him down the marriage path!! Nice ending where they decide to enjoy what they have. Sniff!! Lovely scene!!

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defyingnormalcy April 6 2012, 16:35:36 UTC
I love Laura trying to change the subject after leading him down the marriage path!!

Quite the Freudian slip on her part! :P

Thanks for reading. :D

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nixmom April 6 2012, 04:03:47 UTC
I just had a feeling when I saw that prompt that the first thing you would do is thumb your nose at it.

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defyingnormalcy April 6 2012, 16:35:03 UTC
Heh! I tried to be classy about it, I really did. :P

Thanks for reading. :)

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aka_plynn April 6 2012, 04:36:29 UTC
I have such a soft spot for post-coital pillow talk with these two. I love that you have the mood shift back and forth between playful and somber, and end with such a sweet moment.

Love it. :)

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defyingnormalcy April 6 2012, 16:34:33 UTC
I have such a soft spot for post-coital pillow talk with these two.

*sigh* Oh me too. I ADORE post-coital pillow talk with them. :D

Thanks for reading. :)

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bleodswean April 6 2012, 16:55:04 UTC
This is PERFECT!!!! Great job driving the smallish bit forward with dialogue!

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defyingnormalcy April 6 2012, 17:02:33 UTC
Thanks for reading. :D

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larsfarm77 April 7 2012, 02:18:38 UTC
Awesome use of the prompt!

I loved this:

And what sort of traditions exist on New Caprica?

The awkwardness they got in and out of was so great, and so them.

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defyingnormalcy April 7 2012, 14:26:54 UTC
I totally love writing them having awkward intimate moments. I find it both endearing and also just realistic. Sex isn't without it's awkward moments after all! :P ;)

Thanks for reading. :D

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