Here are some new lyrics... me and Carlos wrote it

[deftones413]

Lemme know what ya think... think like slow creepy deftones vocals in the verse progressing to a Jet like vocals with a little more scream like My Chemical Romance for the chorus.

This is called sinner...

SINNER
Lyrics by Noel English and Carlos Torres

Verse 1:
You’re always right
I’m always wrong
I’m just your Sinner
Not a significant one

I can feel your eyes
burning through
You tempt to torture
demons can’t get to you

You make yourself my God
And I must obey
the power it feeds you
this sinner tries to escape.

Chorus:
You wanna change me
You wanna play me
You wanna make me
Into a vision of your own

You wanna change me
You wanna play me
You wanna make me
This sinner has flown.

Verse 2:
Your heart feels so lone,
so black, so cold.
Show me one sign of love
And I won’t fold.

You won’t hear my requests
Ignorance is not bliss
The scars left are severe
wounded by your sickening kiss.

Chorus
SOLO

Bridge:
So break these chains
inside of me
cause I’m not free
No I’m not free

Take everything
that you need
You can’t have me
My soul belongs free

Chorus

It sounds bad ass!!! wait till I get all the mixing done!