ok, i lied. i read this chapter too. and its so amazing. im having a bit of trouble with coherency right now, actually. for some reason, i dont like jeff, i think its because im perceiving him as a threat to merlin/arthur, WHICH ISNT GOING TO HAPPEN, RIGHT? right?
ok, this time im really going to bed. i promise! *resists urge to click button to go to next chapter*
I feel completely immersed in this. Your attention to detail has painted vivid scene after vivid scene and the choreography of the action sequences is terrific. Your dialogue sparkles, and I'm thoroughly enjoying Will and Merlin's humor in the face of imminent evisceration. This story continues to unfold beautifully.
Will bowing shakily at the beast because it worked on Harry Potter...seriously I died laughing. Like tears in my eyes, died. And their banter was just hilarious. Fantastic!
Just started reading this and loving it so far. One small bone to pick - "dum spiro spero" isn't from the Inferno, it's a common saying usually attributed to Cicero. The famous line inscribed above the gates of Hell is "Voi ch'entrante, lasciate ogni speranza," that is, "Abandon every hope, ye who enter here." Sort of the opposite sentiment, really, lol.
Wow this is just...wow! I can't get over how brilliant this is! So epic it's mind boggling! I LOVE the whole concept of Magic retaking the world and destroying it in the process. I love how no one really remembers who they are. I love Morgana. She's so cool and out of place and yet not, at the same time! But most of all, I have to admit, I LOVE Merlin and Will's banter. That had me cracking up all through the not-hippogriff's attack. Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I can't wait to read more and hate the fact that I'll have to go to sleep eventually because of having work the next day! :( lol
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for some reason, i dont like jeff, i think its because im perceiving him as a threat to merlin/arthur, WHICH ISNT GOING TO HAPPEN, RIGHT? right?
ok, this time im really going to bed. i promise!
*resists urge to click button to go to next chapter*
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