You Think You've Tried Love, I'll Give You More (for electricdino)

May 25, 2015 17:47

Title: You Think You've Tried Love, I'll Give You More
Recipient: electricdino
Rating: R
Word Count: 5.5K
Warning(s): none
Summary: [Art School AU] Jaebum films Jinyoung's life as a dancer for his senior thesis. Jinyoung falls in love along the way.

Jinyoung didn't think he could love anything as much as dancing until Jaebum came into his life. )

length: 5k-10k, year: 2015, rating: r

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kashchanocchi May 26 2015, 01:02:51 UTC

this was so well written omfgjskxlvkdk

This got me smiling so hard by the time I got to the last paragraph. Like, the story felt so real and unfiltered. It's amazing, thank you!

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hipployta May 26 2015, 02:05:40 UTC
Aww...the renewel of a love of dance hand in hand with his love of Jaebum

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electricdino May 27 2015, 17:29:29 UTC
Thank you so much, <3 This was so beautifully written, and just... *flails* I loved the progression of their relationship, from the initial meeting to their small misunderstandings to the sudden meeting the parents time, XD It flowed really well, and was really realistic. Thank you so much again, <3

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heysupbro May 30 2015, 06:15:38 UTC
I think this is probably one of my favourites from the exchange. Your characterisation of jinyoung was very nice in this, it's not hard to imagine him as being overly-self critical at times, prickly but kind-hearted, etc. The progression of their relationship also felt very realistic, and was relatable.

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wheenawina November 26 2017, 06:07:12 UTC
I love this heartwarming story <33
my favorite part is when jinyoung asked for more kisses on their first kiss moment, I keep re-reading that part bcs it's so so adorable

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