[For sparklepox] Distraction

Jan 06, 2016 19:52

Title: Distraction
For: sparklepox
Pairing: Luhan/Xiumin
Rating: PG-13 (for language and sexual innuendos)
Warning: Mild violence
Length: 5,178 words
Summary: Luhan is an injured shapeshifter looking for a distraction, and he finds it in the form of Dr. Kim Minseok.
Author's Note: To my recipient, I had the toughest time picking a prompt because they were ( Read more... )

2015/2016, pairing: luhan/xiumin, rating: pg-13

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bluedreaming January 12 2016, 03:58:16 UTC
note: I was looping Glitter by Say Lou Lou while I was reading this (spotify) and it sounds like they're saying "can you heal me" so ^^ //smirks//

I love how you went right into the premise of the story, no holds barred, so believable (and Zitao as a panther oh my) and Lu Han is a literal ass but of course he is, but he still has morals, he waits so long for Minseok because he thinks Minseok doesn't want him (and Minseok seriously if you want someone to kiss you then tell them //rolls eyes//)

I thought it was funny that Minseok KNEW Lu Han would be okay but he kept patching him up anyway <3

Anyway I was both laughing throughout (and rolling my eyes in the best way at Lu Han) but it wasn't just funny? It was well-balanced with a touch of yearning and the root underneath the feelings blowing about in the breeze - it was kind of sad to be honest, that Lu Han wanted the tattoos and couldn't keep them.

That was really sad.

But this story wasn't sad and I'm glad it worked out and I like how the tattoos were the conversation catalyst to the proper discussion where they figured out their feelings!

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lotusk January 19 2016, 07:44:34 UTC
I always enjoy your insightful comments ansabear! You're always too good to me ;;;;

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