That makes it interesting and real. There's both sides here, the surface and the dark underside to everything. It was pretty dark with alot of imagery. It had a pulse. It's good.
If you notice I switch the "You" around, its not the same person, and it gets confusing to read.
I did that on purpose and on accident. Its supposed to hurt your brain a bit while you read it. I thought since this applies to everyone, lets just make everyone you and them and she and him.
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Its supposed to leave a taste in your mind... like it would on your tongue.
And if you were listening to Korn- Through Time... while reading it..
You would feel even more connected to those images...
I could polish it up a bit, I might later. But it always stays true.
Everyone has endless universes locked inside of them.
For those who say they're more realistic... I think one day they'll realize... that realism is always in the eye of the beholder.
Its just easier to argue realism if you have people who think like you backing you up.
Everything is a state of mind.
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You really should download Korn - Falling Through Time
Then read it again. Just make sure you have some bump, or headphones.
Its worth it.
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I did that on purpose and on accident. Its supposed to hurt your brain a bit while you read it.
I thought since this applies to everyone, lets just make everyone you and them and she and him.
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