Kiss Me-Chapter Twenty Four

[deeperintodark]

Title: Kiss Me
Rating: PG/NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't know, don't own, never happened, Shakespeare wrote the good stuff, not me.
Summary: Ville and Bam go to school together. They're not friends. They don't even know each other. But when they get roped into Romeo and Juliet, sparks fly!

Comments

[jezebel1386]

"I’ll be Violet forever, he thought. If it would make you love me, I’d be Violet."

Those lines really stood out to me. Not sure why; I just like them.

I continue to be deliciously tortured...

[deeperintodark]

I'm very happy you liked those line!

Love you.

[hottgrl1289]

Again, SOOO Close

[deeperintodark]

Almost there, almost there!

[hilson_is_love]

*slaps DeWitt hard* How dare you stop Willa before he has the chance to explain! Don't you know what damage you're doing? *chases after him with a gravy boat and a wooden spoon*

Porr Willa, soooo close!

And poor Bammie! Soooo confuzzled!

Once again, love you, love this story

[deeperintodark]

I for one, would really run if someone chased after me with a wooden spoon. Those suckers hurt.

Confusion! The stuff that fics are made of!

Love you, too.

[princess_borgz]

yay another awesome update!! I loved the back and forth between Ville and Bam as Juliet and Romeo. I could practically hear them saying the lines and I think it suits them.

I'm so excited to see what comes in the next chapter!

[deeperintodark]

Thank you so much!

[joijoy]

Ohhhh so close! Ville almost told Bam the truth!
Gah! Dammit DeWitt! Go take another call! LOL
Poor Ville! Poor Bam! I love this story so much!
More soon please! XOX =D

[deeperintodark]

DeWitt... Gotta love him for coming up with Romeo and Juliet to begin with...

...Gotta hate that he ruins everything!

Soon!