Like Water

Feb 10, 2008 01:38

Title: Like Water
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Don't know, don't own, never happened.
POV: Ville
AN: This is very special to me. I wrote it without thinking that it would ever be a fan fic... It's me saying goodbye to a relationship. I hope you like it.

Like Water )

one shot, vam

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lvr_girl616 February 9 2008, 06:41:13 UTC
wow....dawwling...that was just lovely....just really I loved the way u wrote this..
*applauds u*

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deeperintodark February 9 2008, 06:54:55 UTC
Thank you very much.

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jezebel1386 February 9 2008, 06:44:53 UTC
May I ask whose pov you were thinking when you wrote this. I'm pretty sure I know (from one line in particular) but of course I could be way off.

And if you don't want to 'kiss-and-tell' so to speak, I understand. Mystery is always good too.

Regardless, this is beautifully written and, of course, I love it!

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deeperintodark February 9 2008, 06:56:44 UTC
I wasn't thinking about this being a fic at all when I wrote it.

This was me writing something after I realized that I was done with a relationship. This is what I felt when I realized that I was over it. These are all the things I wanted to tell that person.

When I went back over it, I thought that it would make a pretty good fic, and I thought that it would be good from Ville's point of view.

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kymburrlee February 9 2008, 06:59:46 UTC
Wow, I loved this.
They way the water was used as symbolism of the two was so poetic.

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deeperintodark February 9 2008, 07:08:58 UTC
Thank you.

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slasher48 February 9 2008, 07:57:42 UTC
You're...wow.

I don't even have a word.

You make me speechless. :D

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deeperintodark February 9 2008, 08:11:28 UTC
I try.

I heart you.

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slasher48 February 9 2008, 19:40:37 UTC
You succeed.

...I heart you back. Like you wouldn't believe. :)

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meduusje February 9 2008, 08:16:08 UTC
fantastic indeed
but still wished you didn't have to write this...

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deeperintodark February 10 2008, 04:11:27 UTC
I'm glad I did.

I'm glad that everything I did in that godawful relationship is over. I don't hurt half as bad as I did over it anymore.

Writing this was one of most helpful things I've done this weak.

I'm glad you liked it, too.

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meduusje February 10 2008, 07:32:27 UTC
glad it helped!
thank god writing does that :)
and thank you for charing something that personal with us :)

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