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deelaundry

Commitment, 1/2 (R)

Feb 22, 2007 14:28

Posted to house_wilson and housefic

Title: Commitment, Part 1 of 2
Author: Dee Laundry
Pairing: House and Wilson
Rating: R for theme and language (no sex)
Summary: Much too much; Wilson takes a break.
Note: Takes place about two weeks after episode 3-14 “Insensitive”; spoilers to that point. Beta by the awesome daisylily. For nightdog_barks, who has always feared that Wilson will break ( Read more... )

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skyvehicle February 22 2007, 20:33:58 UTC

Woah. That was freaky.

skyvehicle February 22 2007, 20:34:38 UTC

And by freaky, I mean I can't wait to see what happens.

deelaundry February 22 2007, 22:49:13 UTC

Thanks! Working on part two right now...

anonymous February 22 2007, 20:45:44 UTC

I am terrible at feedback, but I raced through reading this even though I really should be working, and found it awesome. I hope the rest is coming soon. Patience is a virtue, but not one of mine!

hannahrorlove February 22 2007, 20:51:12 UTC

Wow, this was good. It's unnerving to see the clarity Wilson is willing to use right now when it's so far from how he is on the show.

And I don't think this icon has ever been more appropriate.

deelaundry February 22 2007, 23:06:21 UTC

That is an appropriate icon. Thanks for the comment!

hannahrorlove February 22 2007, 23:28:30 UTC

You're quite welcome.

If you'd like a copy of the song the icon's quoting, I'd be happy to upload one for you.

silja_b February 22 2007, 20:54:55 UTC

Wow... sorry, I'm still trying to locate my jaw somewhere on the floor.

I can't wait. I literally can't wait to read what happens next. I suspect there won't be a happy ending though. You do have a record of breaking Wilson a bit too meticulously.

deelaundry February 23 2007, 01:05:57 UTC

Thanks. Working on Part Two now. You may be pleasantly surprised...

r0s3l992 February 22 2007, 20:55:13 UTC

Wow. Very powerful, very moving, very good. Eep. Wilson was effected a lot worse by House's overdose/suicide attempt than he seemed to be, wasn't he? He sees House as dead? That's got a lot of implications. Maybe in a way Wilson sees the old House, the one that he loved, as having died, and House as he is not being the old House, if you get what I mean. Or not, I could be talking complete crap.
I liked Darlene, by the way. Her interaction with Wilson was great.
More soon please!

deelaundry February 23 2007, 01:08:01 UTC

Thanks so much. Very interesting analysis of what Wilson may be thinking! More to come in Part Two.