ah... tease!:) so short and with no many details... and still good:)) i like the rhythm of it. it's like... well, being that sub and loving all of it:)) i love your sub-stories:)) thank you, that was a very... stimulating sort of New-Year gift...:))
I thought about making it be double anal penetration, but figured they would decide on a position with less preparation work required. Maybe there'll be a ficlet in this AU in the future with double-double penetration (two in sub's mouth, two in sub's anus)...
i like the rhythm of it. it's like... well, being that sub and loving all of it
I am beaming ear to ear, because that's exactly what I wanted the rhythm to be like. In the challenge I wrote this for, each bit could be a maximum of 100 words. At first the word restriction was frustrating, but in the end it helped give a better "internal monologue" flow. :) Thank you!
I did it! Took a lot longer than it should have, and I then spent an even longer time wrestling with the HTML, but... YAY! Thank you for the encouragement.
I usually don't go near these kinds of stories, but since it's you I read them. And they are GREAT! Such a distinctive voice and POV, great rhythm, strange blend of wtf and down-to-earth reality. Dang!
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i like the rhythm of it. it's like... well, being that sub and loving all of it:)) i love your sub-stories:))
thank you, that was a very... stimulating sort of New-Year gift...:))
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I am beaming ear to ear, because that's exactly what I wanted the rhythm to be like. In the challenge I wrote this for, each bit could be a maximum of 100 words. At first the word restriction was frustrating, but in the end it helped give a better "internal monologue" flow. :) Thank you!
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Now you just have to go suggest the "For Your Consideration" mini-bingo challenge. Or else I will!
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