gift fic: "untouched"

[dee_lirious]

Look at me, I've finally written something! It's a miracle. :D

Title: Untouched
Fandom: Narnia RPS
Pairings/Characters: Skandar/Will
Rating: PG-13 for language and mentions of sexual situations.
Disclaimer: Not mine. At all.
Summary: Ben apparently leads a secret life of sock-filled debauchery.
Notes: This is for the lovely

Comments

[likeflames]

Holy crap! Not only did I adore the lack of pr0n, it was absolutely hilarious and tragic at the same time. Like, I was so sad for Skandar, but I just couldn't stop laughing, it was so good.
Soo..
Fantastic!

[dee_lirious]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it even though it was very tame. :D

[biggrstaffbunch]

My God.

My, effin', God.

I'm a bit new to the RPF side of things in Narnia fandom, but let's be honest--the only reason I've even entered the fandom is because of the deliciousness of these lovely boys, so...Will/Skandar is sort of an inevitability, yeah?

And this? This puts regular fic to shame. Humorous and hot and painful and sweet and endearing beyond measure. It made me tear up, and it's RPF, I never tear up at RPF! OH MAN.

If I become some sort of Will/Skandar degenerate, you are entirely to blame. Thank you for this!

[dee_lirious]

Will/Skandar pulls you in and refuses to let you go. It's like a clingy and overbearing, but completely adorable child.

I WILL TAKE THE BLAME WITH GLADNESS.

Thanks so much, I'm really glad that you liked it. :D :D

[starsimpulse]

how does this only have like two comments?

how has this not taken over the ENTIRE narnia rpf fandom?

wow. this was just, wow.

i've read alot of will/skandar but i think this might be my favorite, ever. it's just so real. i can see every bit of it happening. and the way you wrote skandar's voice was just phenomanal.

i can't even pick a favorite part, it's just so fantastic.

i lovelovelove will and skan's banter throughout, but exspecially in the beginning.

ooh, and ben and his socks!
and georgie drinking margiritas!
and this:

A minute later, Ben is distracted by a girl in a tube top and goes swaying after her, leaving Will to proclaim himself the winner. He bows over-dramatically to the small audience that’d gathered and makes his way towards Skandar’s place at the bar.

i don't even know why i love this so much ( i don't even like ben) but i think it's because i can actually see will doing this

[dee_lirious]

THIS COMMENT MADE ME SQUEE SO HARD.

I have to admit, I love reading will/skandar fics that sort of sacrifice real for something romantic or silly, but I can't seem to write that way. I'm really glad that this style worked for you!

Thank you so much, I'm happy that you liked it. :D

[anonymous]

that was beautiful, i absolutely loved it! brilliant, bloody brilliant, you've captured the emotions so perfectly. I loved the angst too!

[immaculate_beam]

God, I nearly died.

That was SO tragic and SO funny and SO BEAUTIFUL at the end. Will/Skandar is a God-send.

Btw, I love the whole sock thing!

*flails*

[dee_lirious]

thank you so much bb! ♥