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[dedalushme]

thanks for all the feed back; i got a lot of helpful hints (no sarcasm).

here is one more (albeit bad) poem; i wrote it to fill in the last spot (of eight). here ya go:

Social Barbiturate

I have words of allure,
words of intrigue.
I swear it.
And an eagerness
to share them.
I really do.

I tithe my words
not because I am stingy-
words of movement
and meaning
are always lost on
the insensate.

--soundigns is officially over for me!