Breathe In, Breathe Out

[december21st]

“Breathe In, Breathe Out”

A drabble of 100 words

By December21st

Fandom: Castle

Rating: PG

Pairing: Technically none, but it wants to be Castle/Beckett

Warnings: None

Summary: In times of crisis, it’s important for everyone to know their jobs.

Comments

[tanyareed]

This was really interesting. I'd love to see it as part of a bigger piece. I liked it a lot.

[december21st]

What high praise, to say you want more ... I appreciate it.

[lattelady6]

Really good. I admire people who can write drabbles that punch the reader in the gut. This is one of those. Bravo!

[december21st]

Thank you so much!

[fairest1]

I admire the fact that you did a CPR-ish scene wherein the characters are more focused on staying alive than the romantic implications of lip contact. There are canons that don't pull that off.

[december21st]

Thanks! The funny thing is, I started out trying to make it about the romantic implications of lip contact ... but I liked this way better.

[divamercury]

Oh wow. This is probably the best drabble I've ever seen. I would love to have it inspire a longer story. How'd they get in the river? What happens next? Inquiring minds want to know. ;) Anyway, great job!

[december21st]

High praise indeed! Thank you mightily.

[padawanpooh]

An excellent drabble. You've packed a heck of a lot into just 100 words.

[december21st]

It's like packing a suitcase. It takes a few tries to get everything in there just right! So thank you!