Daisy Bell (Part 2 of 2)

[december21st]

“Daisy Bell”
(Part 2 of 2)

By December

Fandom: Supernatural

Rating: PG

Pairing: None.

Warnings: A little swearing.

Summary: Some hunts are all sunshine and daisies. That doesn’t make them any less dangerous.

A/N: “Daisy Bell” lyrics by Harry Dacre. Originally published as “Bellis Perennis.”

Part 1 can be found here.

Comments

[brin_bailey]

Wow. I'm not sure how I missed the first part of this, but holy crap! Creepy. Old timey music and little girl ghosts freak me the fuck out. Seriously.

Very well done!

[december21st]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you thought it was creepy and freaky.

Re: very scary ghost story

[december21st]

Thank you, I'm glad you thought it was well-written.

I'm sorry that you don't like the way I ended it, but I appreciate your letting me know that you felt that way about it.

[erinrua]

Wow, creepy and crawly and altogether eerie! The idea of over fifty murders over as many decades is just ... brr. Plus throw in ghostly children singing, and I got major goosebumps! Great twist to the whole case-file genre. :-)

I do agree with the poster who questioned the done-ness of this tale, though. Such a chilling and yukky story deserves a good wrap-up, and we're not told what Dean's plan is, to set all those fifty ghosts to rest ... *offers your muses chocolate* ;-)

[december21st]

I'm glad you enjoyed it (for the most part) and that I gave you goosebumps! Thanks!

I decided that adding anything beyond this would be both boring and anticlimactic, so the ending will stand as it is. I still appreciate you taking the time to give me constructive criticism -- it shows that you care about the fic enough to want it to be better.

[erinrua]

Thank *you* for putting up with my nosiness! :-) Again, great fic and thank you for sharing.