YOU ADDED A HAVEN REFERENCE!!!! +1 000 000 fandom points to you.
Those words are not correctly spelled unless they're accented, darn it. (I noticed you did not change the spelling of 'manoeuvre' or 'colour', however. *g*)
It was and you did not. Kinda surprised me, actually. But, hey, you did a great job making a billion and six rewording suggestions, so clearly you were not brainfried at the time.
That... is kind of embarrassing, actually. I'm going to blame that little oversight on Beta Brain: so focussed on the editing portion of reading that other things slipped by.
You are exaggerating slightly. I'm pretty sure it was only a billion and three suggestions. :p~
(I kid, I kid. Your original draft was very well done.)
Those words are not correctly spelled unless they're accented, darn it. (I noticed you did not change the spelling of 'manoeuvre' or 'colour', however. *g*)
Good job with the story. =)
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Thanks!
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(My brain is SO FRIED.)
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You are exaggerating slightly. I'm pretty sure it was only a billion and three suggestions. :p~
(I kid, I kid. Your original draft was very well done.)
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