It Was Worth It

Jul 21, 2008 21:25

Title: It Was Worth It
Author: shalli
Beta: Rhyadra
Rating: PG
Characters: Hagrid, Harry Potter, Teddy Lupin, Kreacher, Winky, quite a few others
Word Count: 3,124
Summary: In the war, everybody lost something. Now, ten years later, does that something still mean the same thing?
Prompts: Don't you sometimes wonder if it's worth all this? I mean what you' ( Read more... )

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vegablack62 July 21 2008, 14:12:21 UTC
The structure was clever; you began with the Centaurs saying "Jupiter was bright tonight" and ended with Harry receiving a treacle tart, different from the original but close enough that we all remember the references. I liked your portrayal of Teddy. He was a real boy. The mention of Fred surprised me for a moment till I realized he was George's son.

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shalli July 25 2008, 12:13:02 UTC
Thanks for the review. My beta was a bit worried about my use of Fred in this too. I quite like the idea of Teddy and how he came out here. Writing this has actually inspired me to do a bit more writing, which is interesting, as I haven't really written anything ficcish in a couple of years at least.

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vegablack62 July 21 2008, 14:14:29 UTC
I can't believe I quoted "Jupiter was bright tonight" which doesn't even make sense. "Jupiter burns bright" is so much better.

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mondayagain July 22 2008, 05:56:53 UTC
Absolutely beautiful. The sections with the house elves nearly made me cry. Fantastic job.

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shalli July 25 2008, 12:13:22 UTC
Thank you very much.

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