[Ficlet] #38

[debsk]

Title: Colours
Author: debsk
Claim: Minho/Taemin
Prompt: #38 - Beautiful Disaster
Fandom: SHINee
Rating: NR-17
Word Count: 998
Summary: The room changes into a psychedelic amalgam of oranges and yellows that threaten to swallow Taemin and Minho.
Notes/Warnings: This is an Alternative Universe with superpowers and mentions of much more people than the

Comments

[debsk]

Spot for justangel

[justangel]

ASDFGHKLRDRKSRKNDEFUCKYEAHSMUT!!!

BE RIGHT BACK AFTER THE UNFF!!

[justangel]

FFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU----------

WHAT IS TTHIS I DONT EVEN--WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MEE!!!!!! OMG, I WISH THIS IS 10000WORDS LONG COS THERE JUST.NOT.ENOUGH.HOTNESS. AND DAMN I'M INCOHERENT AND TORN BETWEEN ALL GIGGLY AND HEARTBROKEN FOR A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT REASON THAN THE AWESOMENESS OF YOUR STORY!!!!

So... It's past midnight here and I have to wake up in mere few hours and I just had a devastating chat. Also, I type on my phone. So...sorry bb, if my comment is lacking appreciation toward this masterpiece of yours. But really, I enjoy it to the core ♥

[debsk]

I'm sorry you were kind of down when I posted it I know it has nothing to do with me, but being kind of down is always less nice than being kind of cheerful

Don't worry. I don't think I write smut as well as I would like, so I'm never happy with the results whenever I try and do it. But trying should help, really.

Thank you so much for reading Unnie ♥♥

[justangel]

I'm up again now, don't worry to much ^^
Having a chat with a certain someone IRL is always making me feel slightly down.

oh but baby, your smut is perfect! It's not just a smut, but an elaborate part of the story where the subtle-yet-smokin' hot sex scene became an extension of the plot--a significant one. There were just clues as how Taemin's and Minho's body chemistry reacted towards each other, and it helped a lot in understanding the subsequent chapter (now that I've read it ^^).

Overall, I LOVE it how you made it seems like together, Minho and Taemin could create a universe when they're making love.

[debsk]

I will worry, but that's because I'm like that. If it was for me, everyone I like would have more happy days than sad ones ^^

In my head it's always better. I think I have a long way to go before being able to tell what I have in mind exactly. It's not that it's bad, or that is out of place within the plot. Simply that I think it could be way better.

In my head, Minho and Taemin can. They're that type of OTP that has something so special when they are together... *sigh* I'm silly enough to wish they had that IRL, with each other would be great, but with anybody else would work. They deserve to be happy ^^

/silly mode off