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Parallax, part 4

Mar 16, 2010 21:32

This poor, neglected story. ^_^

Go here for links to the previous parts of the story.

( Why are you trying to scare the freshmen? )

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Comments 6

luvthejem March 18 2010, 08:20:43 UTC

YAY! You're back!!! Excellent! Despite having never seen She's the Man, I find myself liking this story. LOL! It helps that you're making it pretty easy to follow by not bogging down with a lot of stuff that happened in the movie I didn't see. *G* Can't wait to see how Viola handles Olivia's arrival.
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Does your return mean that another chapter of either Cherry Blossom or Prometheus is coming soon? *bouncing hopefully*

obsidian179 March 18 2010, 08:33:20 UTC

Thank you. And StM isn't all that complicated of a movie, so I think my story has already given the highlights. ;) And how Viola handles that should be... interesting. ^_^

And it is entirely possible, muse-willing.

anonymous March 31 2010, 04:59:25 UTC

Oh my! Olivia is finally brought into Viola's double life, wonder how this will turn out, ha-ha.
No, all jokes aside I truly am glad you posted this, there are far too many unfinished good fics for this shipping and as someone who worships good writing and the VixLiv ship, I'm holding onto this story like my life depends on it xP
Now, I probably will read back, but did Viola officially break it off with Duke or are things still up in the air?
I'm pretty certain they parted on 'good' terms however, I also remember Olivia's big petpeeve with Vi was her 'current' relationship status. Though, I gotta say, love how that made little to no regards to her actions to tame Vi's heart. Lol.
Once again, awesome chapter, loving the subtle drop-notes of Lucy and Amy. Oooh, can't wait until those two come into the picture!
Thanks for uploading <3

obsidian179 March 31 2010, 07:29:30 UTC

Oh, you'll find out what happens with Olivia next chapter. I'm not spoiling it this time. ;)

Did Viola break up with Duke? Well, yes... and no. She did tell him about her and Olivia, but he didn't quite believe her. She does plan to officially break up with him when he comes to visit, though, and has made it clear to Liv just who she really wants. ^_^

Thanks for your comment - I always love feedback - and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

demoka April 1 2010, 11:25:04 UTC

omg yay! It was great to read this fic again!

OMG! Why is Olivia here? XP Is she turning to the darkside for some thrills?

Are they undercover now....? huh.... I would consider this dangerous, especially since they've only had first classes.... Geez Kelly!

But yes, I'm excited that Olivia is getting a bigger role!

obsidian179 April 1 2010, 23:32:01 UTC

Thank you. ^_^

And all - well, okay, not ALL, but enough - will be revealed next chapter, don't worry.