The Road, Again

May 26, 2010 05:52

Title: The Road, Again
Author: debbiel66
Characters: Dean, Sam (refers to Lisa and Ben)
Spoilers: S5 spoilers all the way through to 5X22; AU Season 6
Rating: R (language) Gen
Word Count: 7600
Disclaimer: not mine
A/N: A huge thank you to callisto65 and ariadnes_string for the the wonderful beta ( Read more... )

road!verse, fic, supernatural

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ficwriter1966 May 26 2010, 13:36:32 UTC
Oh, that's just PERFECT, Debbie! So beautifully done. We need that as a S6 opener.

I like the problems you've set up: Sam being cold all the time, that the sun bothers his eyes. Definitely makes sense. And I think you've set up a very plausible resolution to the Lisa & Ben situation - staying friends with them, and stopping by occasionally for a little R&R, a good meal, coaching Ben. Nice!

And that little "Sammy knows everything" flashback? Awesome!! I just loved it.

What a nice thing to find this morning, especially after I'd posted to ask everyone to come up with some fun stuff. Thanks for this!

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debbiel66 May 26 2010, 22:00:02 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! This was pretty much my wish fulfillment fic, so I'm thrilled it worked that way for you as well. Am so happy you liked it - thank you SO much!

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klutzy_girl May 26 2010, 14:22:04 UTC
Yay, I've been waiting for this! I loved it. It was so good.

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debbiel66 May 26 2010, 22:00:24 UTC
What a nice thing to say - thank you! &hearts

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sistabro May 26 2010, 14:25:40 UTC
This is great. I love how messed up they both are and how they are slowly healing and how surprised Dean is that yes, he can still be friends with Lisa.

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debbiel66 May 26 2010, 22:01:31 UTC
I really wanted as much of a happy ending as I could get for the guy in this one. (Although one of my betas did suggest this could be a 'verse, which has possibilities...) Thanks so much for reading. :)

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sistabro May 27 2010, 02:28:32 UTC
Verse!!!

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debbiel66 May 27 2010, 03:58:19 UTC
Verse!!!

Hee! Stranger things have happened... :)

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batgurl10 May 26 2010, 14:32:54 UTC
I simply adored this and wanted u to know.

Ive been waiting for a sam gets back type of fic with some actual repurcussions of his time in hell. and u described them perfectly, cuz one does not come back from hell unscathed. I just loved every second of this, so realistic.
Bravo!!!

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debbiel66 May 26 2010, 22:02:19 UTC
Wow, I'm so glad you felt it worked. And I'm just thrilled you enjoyed it and it meant something to you. Thank you so much for reading!

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ash48 May 26 2010, 14:43:05 UTC
Oh hun, this is so beautiful and perfect. Love all the little hints that Sam isn't ok, but in true Winchester fashion he'll make it. Love that he knows what Dean wants - a mix of the Lisa and Ben life, but not without Sam.

I also love the quiet pace of the piece. It just felt so right after the heartbreak and turmoil of the final episode. A slow movement toward everything somehow being better.

I heart this fic to little pieces. I desperately needed to read a coda like this without even realising it. It just makes everything so much better.

<33333

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debbiel66 May 26 2010, 22:03:38 UTC
*happy twirl* I'm just so glad you liked the story. It's pretty much my wish-fulfillment story, which does feel a little self-indulgent, so I'm just thrilled it made things better for you too. Thanks so much for reading!

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