Hi, I am looking for a bit of help.
Hi
I am looking for a beta-reader to help me to edit my story, the Adventures of Valeria Richards, Disciple of Wiccan. I would really appericate the help and in return I would write you into the storyline as one of Val's friends and who will make appearances every now and then. Just leave a response here and I will contact you with my e-mail.
here's the background on the story;
Background: Valeria Richards is 15 going on 16 and is the bane of 25 yr. old Wiccan’s existent, as the result of the mutant Blindfold foreseeing the need of Val having a powerful/good guy/non-crazy teacher or she was going to enviably be heading for the dark side because of the awesome amount of power she unknowingly wields. Along with the fact that Billy needs as Doctor Strange repeatedly told him a magical assistance to help him with all of his magical endeavors and to train the next generation. Just think of her as just his disciple in all his endeavors, so in other words they are stuck together for better or worse.
Valeria just wants to be a regular teenager and enjoy her youth and party and stress about school with her friends, she doesn’t want to go into the family business of being a superhero like her parents and older brother. Val’s demands of normalcy lead Billy and her to butt heads constantly, she feels he needs to chill out enjoy the reminder of his youth and be lay back like his twin, while Billy feels she needs to accept some responsibility and learn patience and control before she takes out Manhattan or all of New York.
thank you
deasuluna
I am looking for a beta-reader to help me to edit my story, the Adventures of Valeria Richards, Disciple of Wiccan. I would really appericate the help and in return I would write you into the storyline as one of Val's friends and who will make appearances every now and then. Just leave a response here and I will contact you with my e-mail.
here's the background on the story;
Background: Valeria Richards is 15 going on 16 and is the bane of 25 yr. old Wiccan’s existent, as the result of the mutant Blindfold foreseeing the need of Val having a powerful/good guy/non-crazy teacher or she was going to enviably be heading for the dark side because of the awesome amount of power she unknowingly wields. Along with the fact that Billy needs as Doctor Strange repeatedly told him a magical assistance to help him with all of his magical endeavors and to train the next generation. Just think of her as just his disciple in all his endeavors, so in other words they are stuck together for better or worse.
Valeria just wants to be a regular teenager and enjoy her youth and party and stress about school with her friends, she doesn’t want to go into the family business of being a superhero like her parents and older brother. Val’s demands of normalcy lead Billy and her to butt heads constantly, she feels he needs to chill out enjoy the reminder of his youth and be lay back like his twin, while Billy feels she needs to accept some responsibility and learn patience and control before she takes out Manhattan or all of New York.
thank you
deasuluna