Comments | dearestlilybean: weep to have that which it fears to lose (Narnia; Susan; PG-13)

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weep to have that which it fears to lose (Narnia; Susan; PG-13)

Jul 26, 2008 23:05

Ah, a Susan piece. As I've already written an Edmund vignette, I think I may have to add to these Peter and Lucy vignettes as well. (They have potential!) Just, not now, ha, when I have so many things already going on and school coming up soon.

weep to have that which it fears to lose - Susan, Susan/OMC - PG-13 - Dark - 720 words
Moving on, Susan ( Read more... )

character: susan pevensie, pairing: susan p/omc, fandom: chronicles of narnia

Comments 4

ineptshieldmaid July 27 2008, 05:21:00 UTC

oh... poor Susan. I especially liked the Susan/Edmund contrast-y bit. Nicely done.

_snookums July 27 2008, 05:44:47 UTC

This is so beautiful and painful. Susan ;___;

callahlily July 27 2008, 07:08:35 UTC

Oh, lovely. The comparison between Susan and the White Witch is chilling - and all too likely. I really enjoyed this.

ronniekins77 July 28 2008, 03:07:36 UTC

Oh, wow, this was absolutely amazing. You got Susan down very well, though it's hard for to me imagine Susan playing favorites between her siblings. I LOVED the part with Edmund and Susan being harsh, as well as the ending with the notecard. Very poignant. :)