stars like liquid (narnia; lucy)

Aug 29, 2008 16:54

stars like liquid
Lucy; G; General / 200 words
Prompt: "paint the sky with stars," 100foraslan. Second entry.

The sun is dead. Lucy feels it in the sting of tears. )

-100foraslan, character: lucy pevensie, fandom: chronicles of narnia

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ayumi_nb August 30 2008, 03:16:42 UTC
Sweet! it was good.

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saraxhp August 31 2008, 01:44:28 UTC
This was beautiful!

I love this line: "The tears form bright white pointed stars in her eyes, paint her vision, blur and block out all else with their luminosity."

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babydracky September 1 2008, 10:33:29 UTC
Really nice.

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