[FIC] In the Fire the Ghost of You (R) for uglybusiness

Dec 15, 2009 04:29

Type: Fanfic
Title: In the Fire the Ghost of You
Recipient: uglybusiness
Author: bold_seer
Rating: R
Warnings: Metaphysical sex.
Spoilers: Season five, at least to 5x04.
Summary: What would an angel do for you? What would you do for your angel?
Prompt: Cas and Dean have to do something magick-y, some spell that requires drawing magic symbols. Aiming for ( Read more... )

length:3k-5k, rating: r, #xmas 2009, gift type: fic

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uglybusiness December 15 2009, 12:06:01 UTC
Oooohhh. I love this to bits. The rhythm, the angst, the beautiful prose, the whole idea... The way you made the "metaphysical sex" scene and entire ritual not about the sex itself (or getting "angeled-up") but their connection is perfect.

I did it - all of it - for you. For you, Dean. You. Dean feels himself slowly melt into a pool of nothingness, climax into Nirvana. One second, there’s the sweet taste of the sugar crust of an apple pie; he doesn’t know why he would think of that, it’s just right, it comes to him.

And falling from grace in love tasting like forbidden fruit apple pie? Ooohhh again.

“A wing-flasher, huh? Wouldn’t have taken you for a guy like that.”

To Dean’s defence, he really just tries to lighten the mood. For Castiel’s sake, as well. Because they all could do with a laugh in the midst of all this misery. It’s not much, but he thinks he sees a small smile play on Castiel’s lips.

A genuine one this time.



Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

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bold_seer January 12 2010, 21:32:05 UTC
Thank you! Your comment is everything one could hope for. <3 It was an interesting prompt to work with. :)

Oh, and btw, I’ve used one of your D/C wallpapers as my desktop background for, erm, quite some time now. ;)

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archon_mentha December 15 2009, 12:52:48 UTC
Enjoyed this very much - the writing is lovely!

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bold_seer January 12 2010, 21:32:49 UTC
Oh, thank you! :)

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inksheddings December 15 2009, 14:11:54 UTC
The mood of this story really struck a chord with me. Lovely!

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bold_seer January 12 2010, 21:33:13 UTC
Glad it worked for you, thanks!

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thevinegarworks December 15 2009, 15:31:35 UTC
I love how moody and personal this feels, like you're really deep inside Dean's head while all this is going down, and the tension between Dean and Castiel was excellent. Awesome work, anon.

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bold_seer January 12 2010, 21:34:19 UTC
A little too deep inside his head, perhaps? :)

Thank you so much! <3

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morganoconner December 15 2009, 15:36:11 UTC
The rhythm of this is astoundingly beautiful. I haven't gotten around to reading many of the gift fics so far, as I've been ridiculously busy, but the summary for this intrigued me and I needed a break. I'm so glad I clicked on the link! This almost reads like poetry, and the imagery is just gorgeous. The connection you've portrayed between Dean and Castiel is perfect. I'll definitely need to read this again when I have more time!

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bold_seer January 12 2010, 21:35:17 UTC
Oh, that’s a lovely comment! Thank you. <3

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