Comments | deancas_xmas: [FIC] Break Me for dropout

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[FIC] Break Me for dropout

Dec 15, 2011 12:00

Gift type: Fanfic
Title: Break Me
Author: shadowrose81
Recipient: dropout
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3303
Warnings: non-con, dub-con, first time
Spoilers: None
Summary: Dean didn’t know that dealing with his feelings for Cas could leave him in so many pieces.

( Break Me )

length:3k-5k, #xmas 2011, rating: nc-17

Comments 19

cupidsbow December 15 2011, 18:13:15 UTC

This is really visceral, edged like a knife. I love this line...

Dean scrapped his nails down Cas’ back and earned himself several hard thrusts

darkforetold January 14 2012, 20:16:11 UTC

Excellent! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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darkforetold January 14 2012, 20:16:26 UTC

Thanks for the read/comment!

darcystarbuck December 15 2011, 19:11:09 UTC

oh, wow...
*coherent thought has been smitten by BAMF!Cas*

( ... )

darkforetold January 14 2012, 20:16:46 UTC

I'm thrilled you liked it. Thank you for the read/comment. :D

akadougal December 15 2011, 21:11:18 UTC

Oh that's dark. Visceral and nasty and just Dean all over. Need a hug. Just like Dean. And Cas. Wah.

darkforetold January 14 2012, 20:17:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

As always, I appreciate your read/comment, bb! <33

triedunture December 16 2011, 04:29:17 UTC

Oh man. I'd like to believe Cas wouldn't hurt Dean in this way, but this was just so IC and convincing...I'm a little sold on the idea. Dean's internal monologue too: spot on. Just more guilt every step of the way.

darkforetold January 14 2012, 20:18:11 UTC

I'm SO glad you thought this was IC. It was kinda of difficult to do a realistic, IC non-con situation. I'm appreciative that you think I hit it on the mark! Thank you for the read/comment!