[FIC] Nascor & Nativity for liadan14

[qthelights]

Gift type: Fanfic
Title: Nascor & Nativity
Author: jordandesolated
Recipient: liadan14
Rating: PG
Warnings: Religious themes
Spoilers: Minor spoilers through season six
Wordcount: 1778
Summary: Castiel visits Dean on Christmas Eve
Author notes: Merry Christmas!

Comments

[angelshandprint]

I love this. It was really beautiful with Cas' voice through it all. But I think the ending line isn't very connected to the rest. Some transition would be great :)

[tawg]

I really loved Dean's view of Sam at the start, and then Castiel dragging Dean away from those thoughts for a while. I really liked your interpretation of God's intentions for the angels, and I could almost see Cas saying those lines in my head.

I agree that the last line is very disconnected, but I like that. We go from Cas accepting temptation and starting a new adventure, and Dean gaining something new in Cas, to Sam who is left with no emotion and a violent existence. It's a sneaky punch, but I like it.

[lilyleia78]

Oh, that's moving and beautiful. Thank you.