[Fic] Untranslatable (NC-17) for spacefragments

[deancas_xmasmod]

Gift type: Fanfic
Title: Untranslatable
Author: trinityofone
Recipient: spacefragments
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Spoilers: General S5
Summary: I too am not a bit tamed, I too am untranslatable / I sound my barbaric yawp over the roofs of the world. -Walt Whitman, “Song of Myself”
Author notes: spacefragments asked for Castiel getting used to a physical body. I hope you enjoy this take

Comments

[spacefragments]

oh my god the wait was so, so worth it. AND i can thank you in person right away! this is amazing and everything i wanted out of that prompt-- it's like you read my mind. i love how you handled the divide between cas(tiel)'s detached observations and the experience of sex itself, which was hoping to see if the prompt was written. i love that you could read his happiness between the lines before he even said that he was happy. as a small aside, thank you thank you thank you for the little bit of handprint!porn. totally one of my biggest kinks and i don't even remember mentioning it in my sign-up!

you got some really funny lines in there too-- the reference to the angel!hair especially! one of fandom's great mysteries.

and the ending? gave me chills. in the best of ways.

thank you so much for writing this for me! ♥

[trinityofone]

Oh, thank you! I'm so, so glad you liked it! Your prompt hooked right into one of my favorite things, too, but weirdly that made it especially hard to write it to my satisfaction, so I'm really pleased to hear that it met yours!

However, while I wish I could claim Phenomenal Psychic Powers, you did mention handprint!porn as one of your likes. I'm so happy I could get it in there and that you enjoyed it!

Happy holidays and many cheers! :)

[mf_luder_xf]

Whoa, hello, sucker-punch ending! Damn.

The rest though, was luxurious. I loved every moment of it. Cas' thoughts, the way you described him feeling his body made *me* feel it, his interaction with Dean, Dean yelling at Sam through the wall (lol), and then the pretty princess stuff. Too cute.

[janie_tangerine]

Hiii. That was some seriously great stuff oh my. Your Cas voice was absolutely spot-on perfect and it all flawed so smoothly, I absolutely loved your prose here. <33 And the bit of scar porn, mm. Hot. Indeed hot. And Dean's voice was perfect too and ouch at the ending, but it really worked in the contest. This was great!

[strangeandcharm]

I should be flailing about teh hawt and the way this is so gloriously evocative and moody and how awesome the sleepy morning-sex was but I'm afraid I got distracted by this:

“I think I have become vain,” he says.

I love you so much for that. :)

[olympia_m]

I really have no words to express how utterly awesome this is - how gloriously amazing. and teh ending - oh, the ending!!! I simply loved this :):)