[FIC] Auld Lang Syne (R) for Twodromance

Dec 18, 2009 21:44

Gift Type: Fanfic
Title: Auld Lang Syne
Recipient:twodromance
Author: lassroyale
Rating: R
Warning: Takes place in the alternate reality of 5.04 - "The End". Angst, bittersweetness
Disclaimer: Absolutely not mine, which is probably fortunate.
Parings/Characters:future!Dean/future!Castiel
Notes/Prompt(s): Christmas-themed
Word Count: 4420
Beta Reader: 22by7 - without her ( Read more... )

length:3k-5k, rating: r, #xmas 2009, gift type: fic

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juwel_fic December 19 2009, 00:40:36 UTC
ouchie!

Loved it. *g*

(and on a side note, the phantom pain of his missing wings perfectly explains the drug use! I like how you wove that in, and also the story of the broken foot. :) )

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c00kie December 19 2009, 00:44:07 UTC
How did you manage to write something so hurty yet so hopeful at the same time? Seriously, how? The way you portrayed their relationship, even in the harsh landscape of The End, that even as broken as they both are, they still have each other and are at their cores, still the same Dean and Cas, is wonderful.

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rockstarpeach December 19 2009, 02:02:46 UTC
Yes. Just... yes.

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twodromance December 19 2009, 02:11:25 UTC
future!fic! oh, anon, you know the way to my heart. ♥
i seriously loved every bit of this but i'm going to attempt to articulate some of my excitement here (WHERE DO I START?) so bear with me.

It had been the Bible that Dean had clutched while stricken with ghost fever and haunted by images of Lilith.

that scene, to me, is one of the most powerful in the entire series -- the fact that you've not only referenced it but given it even more significance just makes me all kinds of happy.

He could feel Dean's warmth linger along the pads of his fingers and the lines of his palms.

the exchange by (on?) the impala was so cold and bitter and then there was this. you conveyed a lot with a really simple gesture and i may have gotten a little teary-eyed.

It was the best, and also perhaps the only redemption he could hope for: to be with Dean when it was finally over, because without Dean Winchester, Castiel's existence didn't mean a damn thing.

i don't even have words ;_;

His breath was familiar and warm against his skin and it was a ( ... )

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lassroyale January 12 2010, 15:38:21 UTC
::flails:: I'M SO HAPPY YOU ENJOYED THIS!! I wibbled about this fic with my beta and it had a major face-lift a few times over...and then I wibbled some more.

:)

It was fun writing for you though!

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thevinegarworks December 19 2009, 10:44:03 UTC
Oh, wow, this was absolutely fantastic. The writing was great in itself, but then you had the parallels between Dean and the Bible, and Cas' narrative voice, and that quiet moment on the hood of the car, and just knowing how everything ends... Hurty, but oh so good.

Really, really great work. ♥

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