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[FIC] Forgive Me (R) for Spilled_Notes

Dec 16, 2009 16:04

Gift type: Fanfic
Title: Forgive Me
Recipient: spilled_notes
Author: brodeurbunny30
Rating: R
Warnings: none
Spoilers: none
Summary: Castiel deals with the play of human emotions on his Angelic senses as he prays in church
Author notes: --

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length:1k-3k, rating: r, #xmas 2009, gift type: fic

Comments 9

archon_mentha December 16 2009, 16:03:55 UTC

I love the way you've written Castiel's doubts and thoughts in this, and that kiss was incredibly hot!

rockstarpeach December 16 2009, 19:18:42 UTC

Oh, poor Cas. So conflicted!

xmarie08 December 17 2009, 03:38:25 UTC

I really loved this. Cas is such a difficult character to write but you've done a fantastic job.

I think this paragraph is my fav:
Once he’d imagined being on the receiving end of Dean’s affections. He’d imagined being thrown onto the squeaky bed, stripped of his garments until the barest of skin was assaulted with hunt-roughened fingers and an extremely talented tongue. Would Dean be rough? Would he unleash his anger and bitterness against him, and torture him with words and pleasure until he couldn’t take it anymore, and gave into a sinful and selfish completion with his sweat coated body laying limply beneath his?

So hot! As is their kiss.

zoemathemata December 19 2009, 20:50:38 UTC

I love thinky Castiel, when we get a chance to get inside his head.
and pushy!Kissy!Castiel is pretty hot too! :)

janie_tangerine December 19 2009, 23:14:27 UTC

Mmm, this was such a great Cas character study, I think you really completely nailed it. And that kiss was HOT. Indeed. This was just lovely!